This is a very well written isekai-based story of a DB Fan taking over the body of the very first villain in DBZ and making effective choices to become the best there ever was or at least survive until the next ARC.

The fanfiction goes into great detail about several functions and details the cannon story never fully explored, like magic, saibamen or some of the forgotten characters from DB (Launch, Mercenary Tao, etc) while keeping smiliar tones to the original work. At the same time, while the main fanfiction sin of providing a self-insert character who gets OP is commited,   the main cast and most side characters still have a reasonable amount of agency provided to them in a dignified manner. Similiarly, the main character does not become unreasonably OP as is the case  in a lot of DBZ/DBS fanfictions, but keeps his level close to what is required from him in the appropriate ARC of the main story. Most importantly, the power and status obtained by the MC is not detracted from the other characters giving them time to shine on their own (YAMCHA). On top of that plot holes and interesting alternate developments are explored showing how the author has clearly been thinking and trying to understand the original story as a whole.

A weekness of the story might be the lack of characterization of the original human posessing Raditz. Yet another fanfic sin which might be rectified in future chapters.

Overall a recomandable read for any fan who still remembers and enjoys the original DB as much as its continuations.

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This was a very wonderful story. Having read till latest chapter I am delighted to leave a review. 

It is a fanfic so relax your aggression if you cannot accept random power up theories and some casual plot changes. So let your imagination fly people. Author has made great use of the Dbz universe and made Raditz into a very sensible character. 

Dbz universe by nature includes insane powerups, close shaves and more power ups. This series does that too. 

I mainly enjoyed reading the Dbz Universe from a different perspective and not going easy on your enemies was great as well. 

I am looking forward to another story from this author and definitely read this if you are flexible enough to understand fanfics are different from original.

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Ok, so I generally enjoy this story.

If you want a DBZ fanfiction, this one is a good one. So long as you understand what DBZ is about: 

Powering up and Cool Fights.

Romance, character development, spicy stuff none of that here, and what there is, it's all relegated to background events or during time skips. So yeah, just like DBZ.

What I will praise is the rationale for power scaling, really well thought out, and something I might take inspiration from. Generally solves the genuine problem with power scaling.

My personal dislike, is the Harem tag, when that's barely addressed or pointed out. Like there's one or two moments where it looks like there's gonna be more development there either in development, romance or lewds. But it's all dropped for more powering up and cool fights. And while I'm not against it, it does feel weird we don't see more of those since this is not a story of Raditz surviving and gaining memories of the future. It's a Self Insert, and it really doesn't feel much like it at times.

This is a solid 8.5/10 IMO, would recommend for casual reading.

Btw, the review of mad dog is a troll, they have even disabled their profile lmao.

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TLDR: Very unsatisfying fanfic and MC's personality is pissing me off so bad. 

Quite unsatisfying for an SI and didn't feel like an SI at all. The MC's personality is basically just Dumb Goku + Prideful Vegeta in the mix. I hate how MC despite being an SI he's so dense even worse than Japanese Protagonists with dense personality. MC doesn't feel like an SI at all, if I'm gonna describe it, it was like the MC transmigrated into Raditz body but then after his memory was transferred to Raditz body his soul died and now we got Raditz with MC's memory. It definitely feels like that. 

Aside from that was the unsatisfying romance & harem. To be exact, there's nothing at all, if I'm going to rate how much romance/harem this story has then I would say it has about 0.000000001% in it! MC has wives but he never act intimate with them, there's no love to be felt, he doesn't even show whether he likes them or why did he even started a relationship with them, and even MC's monologues doesn't say anything about it. 

MC is basically Goku in relationship or maybe even worse than Goku. MC's relationship goes like this, MC met a girl then suddenly next chapter MC suddenly has a child, I didn't even know he was in relationship with any of them but for some reason MC becomes a father out of nowhere then there's another timeskip MC suddenly have another child with another woman out-of-fvcking-nowhere again!! 

MC's interaction with women was like;

Women: *Try to give hints to MC that she likes him*

MC: *confused* huh? What? 

That's basically it. Women basically started liking MC out of nowhere then MC acting like a dunce. Author basically never planned to develop any romance but he keeps throwing women to the MC. 

It would've been better if there's no relationships at all. At least MC wouldn't look stupid to me. MC is pretty much alright but when it comes to women his IQ and EQ drops so bad. 

If you came here to read about the story where MC had interesting interaction and conversations with Characters then you shouldn't be here at all. There's nothing like that here. 

If you just want PURE ACTION, well you can try this. This story feels like author focusing on just training and getting stronger but there's pretty much no decent action to see yet. I might drop this soon. 

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