After following the story for a while, I growed dissastisfied with the series. Characters seem to never grow or learn, so things became repetitive. I started finding some main characters insufferable, and can't see the point to continue reading anymore since I stopped caring about any of them.

Old Review

Story: 5/5 — Entertaining and makes your imagination runs wild!
Pacing: 4/5 — While order and timing of events are very satisfying, the Author skipped some of the details in some events, making the conclusion/progression of the events less impactful.
Characters: 4.5/5 — The main characters, as well as other side characters, are well written, but a very small portion of character development seems too fast in my opinion.
World-building: 4/5 — A system-fantasy world, which seemed generic, but has unique and interesting twists, not to mention the social and economic aspect of world-building. Nicely done.
Grammar: 4.8/5 — Superb!... if you ignore some inconsistencies in some minor characters' names, and weird (stylistic) punctuation for multi-paragraph dialogue. Thus 4.8 instead of 5.

A must-read for grim/dark/gothic fantasy lover.

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Ale12345

Status: unnamed contract

May 29, 2024

I'm loving this story so far.
It is impossible to not cheer for the main character and also her friends/family are absolutly lovely.
Has the rare quality of having both, males and fameles characters well written and the ambientation is also captivating and mysterius so go on author, you are doing a good job

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Sizano

Status: novice wizard

Jul 12, 2024

One of my favorite stories.

You can't help but wanting to hug Rain. It has a creative setting, the characters presented so far are pretty great and it is well written. The cosmic horror and Rains trauma as well as childishness are all greatly done imo.

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RandomReviewer

Status: side stories 17 – 20

Jun 21, 2024

Too early to really review properly, but from what's shown it's pretty alright. My only major complaint is that it's a Grimdark and doesn't say so anywhere, leaving the potential reader with a false idea of how the story is going to turn out.

The story pretty directionless for the most part, with the MC spending most of her time desperately throwing crap at the wall and trying to get anything to stick. Which is what I'd expect from a 10 year old girl in a Grimdark fantasy that really needs more hugs. This does mean, however, that the progression is really slow, and even though there are 150, 000 words it feels more like 50, 000 have passed.

Everything else is too early to say, but so far it's competent and held my attention.

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Clovesnspice

Status: side stories 17-20

Jun 20, 2024

While the spelling and word choice can be kinda odd at times I think this story is really good. Descriptions are vivid, and things are foreshadowed very well. This story does a better job at capturing loneliness and sadness better than probably any other story I've read has.

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