"Xin Diqiu / Oneiros / Ennead / Second World"
"Year 1864 of the Medallions." 16 years before present.

"On the Races’’ by Henry Lovell, British naturalist, 1693 local year, 187 years before present.

Name: Evelyn Burkhardt
Likes: Meritocracy, Justice, [Redacted]
Dislikes: Bullies, Missing her morning coffee
Necrochronometry: 2024
Party Role: Support Spellcasting
A once corporate lackey with an aberrant secret or seven in her closet. Reborn into a devilish body. Unwilling to repeat the same mistakes with her second life.
Name: Deirdre Driscoll
Likes: Being Right, Dedication, Good Colcannon
Dislikes: Slackers, Inaction
Necrochronometry: 1951
Party Role: Spear Skirmisher
A woman raised during the darkest days of Europe. Reborn into a halfling body and obsessed with protecting the innocent from horrors she's all too familiar with.
Name: Liv Karlsson
Likes: Music, Art, Sharing
Dislikes: Rent, Cleaning, Silence
Necrochronometry: 1998
Party Role: Shield Tank
Transient, turnstile hopper, and all around unemployable dreamer. Reborn into a wolven body. Endlessly seeking something solid in a cold impersonal world.
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Everything this story does, it does well.
Good story, good characters, good smut
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Trying to sum up everything I like about this story without just saying "this is good, you should read it." is incredibly difficult. That said... This is good, you should read it.
My absolute favorite part of this story is the characters. I think their inner lives and desires are well thought out, their narrations all feel different, and I personally love how their temporal displacement affects them. Before I found the Glossary (which is fantastic and has images of the characters in addition to blurbs about them), I already had a pretty solid idea of when they came from just due to how they see the world and interact with other characters. One of my particular favorites is how Liv conceptualizes her skills, which is explored in Chapter 22.
Furthermore, I think you've done an excellent job seeding future plotlines and I want to know more. How does the main character's functionally miniscule mana pool, but comparatively massive efficiency at casting spells affect her growth going forward? How does their efforts to overthrow this small town go? Are we going to see the bee girl again I like the bee girl she seems sweet :))
All in all, this is a fantastic story that I hope you come back to at some point in the future, but I will be thinking about this story in all my writing going forward.
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