This story is an excellent case study (ironic given the chapter naming convention) in the way smut w/ plot evolves over time if not given a coherent ending. To be clear, this is a 5 star review, but only for the the first ~200 chapters or so. By present, it is no longer recognizable, and the shift is both completely unsubtle and yet incredibly gradual. I would not rate the last 15 chapters 5 stars as part of this story, but I do think they are of that quality.I'm getting ahead of myself. This is a story about a 

. Or, at least, that's how it starts. It becomes about many things later, but that smut setup is the only thing that stays the same, and its the only consistent and recognizable part of the writing that is present in both the thirty and last thirty (as of writing) chapters. This is probably not a bad thing, but probably not a good thing either. I feel distinctly like there is a point in which I am reading something I wouldn't really want to read if it was tagged this way, and I'll admit freely that I read smut like this to try and improve how I write smut, and not because I actually enjoy it, so I'm biased towards against the gradual shift towards more smut and less plot to begin with. Still, five stars. I think that if you write, and are looking for something to read that will teach you both the ways smut makes a story better and the ways it can make your story unrecognizable, this is a great story to learn from. If you want to imagine yourself , this is also the story for you.

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Very fluffy, slice of life, casual and simple while having great smut scenes and it's easy to immerse yourself. Everytime I finish a chapter I m like "already over? : ("

The story is decent enough, but I like the bigger focus on characters and their interactions.

Edit: The beginning was a little rough, but so far it feels like the author improved in the future chapters. Concerning structure and grammar.

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Disclaimer: personal opinion and observations ahead:

Well... For me this is way too much smut with not enough non-smut story in between.

If that is what you're looking for: go for it. But if you're here for the plot? Maybe you might want to look somewhere else.

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A pretty good story with well done world  building and plot, my only complain is the smut as it  gets to much and just ruin the story. Overall an amazing story that is ruined by the smut 3, 5/5. (That's my opinion and I know there are people that enjoy the smut, hell I like stories with it as well, but here it just ruined it for me)

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Story is not bad, and an interesting take on the genre.

The "R-18" tag is an understatement; once it pours, it starts raining like the MC.

The "R-18" on chapters are disingenuous as it tends to be found in almost all chapters not just dose.-The "R-18" chapters tend to have the "mager scenes", but "dirty talk" and talk of s*x is on most chapters after chapter 17.

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An interesting story because it has a concept that is rarely encountered. I also like the nature of the main character and his harem in solving problems and acting in all situations, their interactions in life They are also very interesting (and very perverted) to read, it's been a long time since I read a novel this fast (in 3/5 days, kinda forgot). Thank you to the author who wrote this novel, my enthusiasm supports you ?

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