The premise is good, the start is decent, but it quickly goes downhill. There seems to be no planning, consistency, or consideration that anything should make any sense at all. The MC hopes to be seen as a hero but has no issues massacring a town of innocents just to skip places in a queue while everyone is distracted, and the concept of adventurer guild in this story is an abomination and couldn't possibly function even at 1% realism, which was the last straw for me so I'm out. It's not even comedy, it's just nonsense and chaos with no thought behind it.
This whole story was really fun to read! The pacing is ridiculously fast and the world is very small, but it's perfect this way. I love the adventurer's guild and its solution to trouble. I was kind of hoping the protagonist would somehow become even more overpowered, it's so easy to root for them doing whatever they feel like.
It was good in a way. I would have liked more of it but it is good how it is. The ending kinda felt rushed but it leaves room for you to make a book two if you want to without needing a book two.
Do not expect this story to be serious, and it will make you laugh. It's basically a parody of everything lit-rpg related. Beginning is quite misleading as main character is trying to be a hero and have a small success, but it then goes quickly downhill from there.
It all started after I received that weird email…
What? Click the boxes to select the body type?
Want me to select a starting point?
Let me put in the name and be done with this, it’s getting late…
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Pain and loss make us better and stronger people. This is the story of a superhero who started from a broken home and found more. When your powers came from a notorious super villain, does that fact define your future? Who you are?
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Clay has been playing his favourite VR sandbox game for nearly 20 years. It was a really believable world where even the NPC’s acted as if they where real, which peaked Clay’s interest in the game.
But that was not the only reaso
A group of rookie adventurers enter an ancient tomb in the hopes finding treasure
Within they found something priceless but it is not something they expected
Within lay an egg that held a species that existed since life began
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(DB) A ‘normal’ teenager was watching Mumei, until an ad popped on his screen, now trying to get rid of the ad ask ”Want to have an adventure?”
(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
The premise is good, the start is decent, but it quickly goes downhill. There seems to be no planning, consistency, or consideration that anything should make any sense at all. The MC hopes to be seen as a hero but has no issues massacring a town of innocents just to skip places in a queue while everyone is distracted, and the concept of adventurer guild in this story is an abomination and couldn't possibly function even at 1% realism, which was the last straw for me so I'm out. It's not even comedy, it's just nonsense and chaos with no thought behind it.
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This whole story was really fun to read! The pacing is ridiculously fast and the world is very small, but it's perfect this way. I love the adventurer's guild and its solution to trouble. I was kind of hoping the protagonist would somehow become even more overpowered, it's so easy to root for them doing whatever they feel like.
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It was good in a way. I would have liked more of it but it is good how it is. The ending kinda felt rushed but it leaves room for you to make a book two if you want to without needing a book two.
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Do not expect this story to be serious, and it will make you laugh. It's basically a parody of everything lit-rpg related. Beginning is quite misleading as main character is trying to be a hero and have a small success, but it then goes quickly downhill from there.
Read More