What would you do if you were thrown into a universe filled with the fantastical? Where people can go from nerdy introverts into superheroes with just a tiny spider bite? Well, Victoria sure as hell seems to be having a fun time!
After a life not worth living, Lady Death took pity upon her poor soul and sent her off into the depths of the multiverse, until it eventually landed into the body of an alternate version of herself. Gifted with a "small" cheat called Telekinesis, she's now decided to become a superhero the likes of which only has been seen several times!
Because getting up there is hard and she's only a month away from the battle that starts an entire series of conflicts, whatever shall she do?!
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PD: I don't like writing synopsis, if you want to see a poor attempt at a fanfic that starts off simple but delves into the reality of being a superhero and the meaning of life, you are more than welcome to follow this story. I wholeheartedly welcome you to my first writing project ever, and probably not the last.
PD;PD: Won't have a cover for a while, trying not to use AI art to make one is kind of difficult and the best I could come up with falls short of being decent. Will probably set one up soon though.
- AnnouncementApr 11, 2024
- Canto II : A DreamDec 23, 2023
- 1.11 : Back 2 SchoolDec 14, 2023
- 1.10 : A Hero’s HeartDec 14, 2023
- 1.9 : AuthorityDec 13, 2023
- 1.8 : The Battle of New York – AftermathDec 13, 2023
- 1.7 : The Battle of New York – Part 2Dec 13, 2023
- 1.6 : The Battle of New York – Part 1Dec 12, 2023
- 1.5 : The Battle of New York – PreludeDec 12, 2023
- 1.4 : Good Job, VickyDec 12, 2023
- 1.3 : PreparationsDec 11, 2023
- 1.2 : Friends, not Roommates!Dec 11, 2023
- 1.1 : Getting Used to ItDec 10, 2023
- Canto I : A Second ChanceDec 9, 2023
- 119 reading
- 28 plan to read
- 5 completed
- 4 paused
- 8 dropped
Loving this so far.
The writing is fairly good, with a few mistakes that don't detract from the word flow. The pacing is great, the word choice is superb, and while the descriptors could be slightly expanded on it's sufficient to get the story across.
A few of the stylistic choices made with how some things are portrayed break from the story a bit but overall don't harm the story (what they are depicting serves the story well, but how it is described breaks a bit from the rest of the writing style).
The story itself is great, with sufficient world-building, setup, and character differentiation. None of the characters are presented as too exaggerated (a common failing in fanfics when an author only has a shallow understanding of a character and relationship dynamics).
Overall, a very good read and I'm looking forward to reading more as it becomes available.
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