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Loving this so far.
The writing is fairly good, with a few mistakes that don't detract from the word flow. The pacing is great, the word choice is superb, and while the descriptors could be slightly expanded on it's sufficient to get the story across.
A few of the stylistic choices made with how some things are portrayed break from the story a bit but overall don't harm the story (what they are depicting serves the story well, but how it is described breaks a bit from the rest of the writing style).
The story itself is great, with sufficient world-building, setup, and character differentiation. None of the characters are presented as too exaggerated (a common failing in fanfics when an author only has a shallow understanding of a character and relationship dynamics).
Overall, a very good read and I'm looking forward to reading more as it becomes available.
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