Cyrus traveled to the world of Harry Potter and thought that splendid magic was waiting for him.
Unexpectedly, he replaced Voldemort's soul in the diary and became "Tom Riddle".
Cyrus: Damn it, I've become Voldemort!
Days passed.
During the days when he stayed in the diary, Cyrus continued to learn and digest Riddle’s knowledge, waiting for the opportunity of resurrection.
It wasn’t until the summer of 1992 that Ginny Weasley wrote down words in her diary for the first time…
"Dear Diary....."
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Original MTL name: HOGWARTS: OOPS, I'M VOLDEMORT
Hello,
I was happy when I found this story yesterday. Even happier when it turned out quite well.
Compared to most fanfictions-, and as far as I am aware-, there is a seed of originality in this.
A potential that shows the first signs to turn into utter dullness. Seeing how exactly the MC follows the original story line when he has absolutely no reason to.
It's quite an enjoyable fanfiction, aside from this hovering tendency.
Still, I suspect that it's a good sign that the author is aware of how human psychology works to a believable enough degree. Which I often find the cornerstone of such novels. And where most fail to come through, at least for me.
The story is nothing extraordinary, but it is well delivered and the concept is good enough to catch the average reader's attention.
The author didn't attempt to bite more than he could fulfill.
Looking forward to read more.
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Ok there's alot of problems with this one starting with the bait title
The MC is actually not Voldemort but the book horcrux which would be ok if the fan fic would be original. But nah its first mentioned he is scared sh*tless and wants to escape Hogwarts but then he plays goes into Draco malfoy and plays a schoolboy.
It's just the bait you go in to read about another perspective then find out its just another school life with an adult who wants to fullfil his dreams of being a brilliant student with romance.
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Edit: TLDR: The only good thing about this story is the grammar and language which is due to the good translator working on this.
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This is really not good. Unfortunately it actually starts interesting but then slowly and steadily the quality keeps dropping making you wonder why there are such obvious issues.
There are specific reasons why I feel this isn't a good story. Till chapter 40 despite some minor differences the overall story is continuing on the same path. There is negligible effort in world building or personality of any character since it seems like a prior assumption you are a HP fan. But what really made me stop is that there are drastic plot holes which are not relevant to the setting of story. Like obvious shift in personality of characters, aggressively picking unnecessary disputes in situations where MC should stay low key and even more.
The grammar and language used is good however so maybe some other fans will enjoy this but I do not think this deserves a better rating due to reasons I mentioned
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While I agree that the grammar can be substandard at times I believe that the other ratings are being too critical of what is a well thought out story with characters that you can relate to and empathise with while also having lighthearted moments in between there confusion as they try to figure out the mystery of who is the heir (except MC as well he is the heir). Overall, the story is well written with the slight awkwardness from cross translation only showing itself in some of the humour and when making fun of Ron
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This is pretty good, at the start it was interesting, since the premise was interesting, he became the diary horcrux, and so he tried to revive himself, which like I said interesting, but during it he started making stupid decisions if you ask me.
There was no reason as to why he started attacking students with the basilisk like the original and follow the plot, he could have just laid low and quietly revive himself. Another thing that I really hate, which I think the author himself doesnt like much since it was used twice and never shown again, is the system, when MC finally resurrects himself he gains a system, that daid he gained the talwnt and memories of the horcrux as a reward for resurrection as well as a skill, this skill got used once, quite a powerful skill but ultimately it was unnecessary, or so I think anyway, this system got used once more later... for something, I dont remember anymore.
But after that whole fiasco the fic became a lot more interesting, a lot of characters started acting and reacting to him as he got out of Hogwarts and cannon has gone to hell which made this super interesting to read.
Another spoiler is, that he gained
ancient magic.
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