‘I am in a world that has magic, different technology, customs, races, and Gods actually do shit, and I have a woman who loves me but also wants to turn me into swiss cheese...’

He looked at the mirror, contemplated his fate, and came to a single conclusion...

‘So be it, I’ll try living.’

Theme: Combination of Magic and Technology

The cover is not mine, I just saw it and thought it was awesome...all rights reserve to the original creator

Genre

ActionAdventureFantasyRomanceSci-fi

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Antihero Protagonist Calm Protagonist Early Romance Fantasy Creatures Magic Magical Technology Yandere

Table of Contents 203

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200. TransparentDec 25, 2022
199. NormalDec 25, 2022
198. GeniusDec 25, 2022
197. WorthyDec 25, 2022
196. ReasonsDec 25, 2022
195. EnmityDec 25, 2022
194. The Dracian FateAug 27, 2022
193. GuardianAug 27, 2022
192. The Cat’s In chargeJul 5, 2022
191. The Cat’s Entrance.Jul 1, 2022
Announcement of ReturnApr 26, 2022
190. The HusbandMar 26, 2021
189. F*cked (Part 3)Mar 19, 2021
188. F*cked (Part 2)Mar 17, 2021
187. The Good WifeMar 10, 2021

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MaoDevon

Status: 21. wishing for plot armor is...

Jun 11, 2020

You guys should give this a chance it's currently one of the things I wait for everyday

It's better than the tons of overused hur hur I'm op crap I see everyday if you like trash of the counts family you'll like this

And hey I fix the grammar mistakes so if you find something scold me hehe

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sabazurc

Status: 41. one more reason why he...

Jul 2, 2020

Story is decent so far but has a fault. The main problem I have is that MC is too weak, I do not think that novels with similar plots work well with weak MC. He will get stronger, yes but there are so many cultivation realms and his fiance who is of same age is so far ahead that it will take a long time. At this rate he will have to fight enemies who are conveniently at his cultivation level or be protected by pet, plot armor or wife too often. OP MC suits this type of novel more. Maybe author has plans to make MC grow fast or maybe he will write so well that I will have to change my opinion. If that will be the case I will change my review score.

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lehur

Status: c120

Dec 3, 2020

Too much copy trash count - table eating at early chap+going to bar reading book+buying bake

Too much forcing coincidences - just go out meet characters and saving + go out blacksmith get accident + go out pet get rare egg, etc

Antihero - really? MC who always being insult and just smile seemingly no care, hecs being insult in his territory openly by commoner, he's so kind, your everyday hero

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Haymore

Status: c5

Mar 29, 2021

TL;DR: Managed 5 chapters, MC ruined it for me. Also read too many similar stories.

Beginning of the novel follows the standard route of;

'I was transmigrated to a death flagged person' -> 'I must avoid the death flag' -> 'Instead of being smart about it, I will follow the story I know' -> 'I am being dumb and cannot avoid the obvious pitfall of the story' -> I don't know what comes after this, didn't read this story. But my guess is lots of misunderstandings and plot armor.

Honestly, the MC would been GOOD if he would have decided to be a good man for his fiancee, instead. I mean the character died because he was unfaithful and fiancee stabbed him, a minor problem that is easily avoided by being a faithful towards the beautiful fiancee. But no, MC decides to 'avoid the fiancee' and/or 'not get the girl interested about him' but fails spectacularly by being caring towards his family, and charming towards his soon-to-be fiancee on their first meeting.

MC could also just been an ass on the first meeting. But that is just too simple solution. So instead the MC seems to think that: The girl that met him for the first time would stab him instantly (while visiting at his noble house, where he is being protected by guards) if he says anything even remotely along the lines of 'I don't like you, please go away.'

All this just because he knows that the girl stabbed unfaithful fiancee in the story. I know dumb people, but this is pretty bad.

Following is guesstimate: Author wants to follow the cliche of 'otome games/ reincarnated as villain' novels (yes, the ones with death flags and dense characters) but with male MC. A Beta MC that will always be weaker than his 'stabby' fiancee and all the other characters that might try to kill or love him later. So to survive he will either get a magical OP pet or is constantly gonna be protected by fiancee adn/or other people who will fall in love with him later.

I have read too many stories like that and I just can not continue to 6th chapter.

If I change my mind at some point I will come back and fix this review. Also if I was completely wrong about the MC, someone please gimme a message or something so I can check this out later. 4.3 is a good rating, but if MC stays as he is I just can't.

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BobTheLost

Status: c77

Jun 10, 2020

[c20]

This is a decent story, or at least volume 1 is decent (c20 is the end of vol 1).

It's a spin on transmigrating into a story as a character with a bad end. As the synopsis says, the transmigrator knows a bit of the story, but basically nothing about his character, except how the character died in the original story. He likely saved his life in vol 1, but given his fiancee's nature, one or two serious accidents could end up with him still getting killed, and vol 2 will likely be a school arc, where such accidents could occur.

On the whole, the writing is decent, and the story flows well. The chapters are decent length, though they feel short. Probably the main complaint I'd have for the first volume is that there is a fair amount of drama but not really all that much action.

[c77]

Just finished c77, and this story is still good, and is getting better. In fact this particular chapter is really well done, such that I felt I should update my review.

Since my initial review, there has been some action, though with how this story has been going, it doesn't really need the action all that much. The action that is presented mostly just accentuates other ongoing story lines.

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XXII

Status: 118

Jun 10, 2020

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so far so good. The twist at chapter 16-19-ish was unexpected (for me). Keep it up author.

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Edit: start 10/10. But for me I think the following arcs have been constantly declining if that makes sense.

Spoiler

the problem with me is that the author tends to give the enemies a bit of backstory that doesn't make sense, atleast to me.

for the future villains that he "converted" I think its okay, bcoz he have knowledge about them which he shared to us the readers, but at some point even the assassins suddenly became a loving parent/family. Which is not wrong tbh, until u remember that these assassins just said some chapters ago sh*ts like "we would have raped u but our employer said don't" out loud lol. Does that sound like someone u can sympathize with?

then next is olivier I think. This dude being hated. Like really hated. Bcoz he 1. Wants to rape the female lead basically 2. Almost killed a kid by squashing her head for the lulz/ to make a more dramatic effect 3. Almost made FL kill herself or the daughter while laughing in the side. The hate to this dude have been brewing since his introduction. And what did the MC do when he beat him? In almost half a chapter, MC cut off his arms and legs then crushed his balls. You would think thats what he gets for doing a lot of sh*ts (also he seems to be the mastermind of the bombing) most of us thought "haha serves u right, suffer more" then a few lines later after a half ass "begging" MC just beheads him. After all the he did he just suffered for a few minutes then died a painless death. Bummer.

bummer indead, the author wants us to think that not everyone is just bad or good. But I think he cant properly do it. Some of these enemies are basically just evil, they dont hesistate or sh*ts like that, then the author would try to make them look kinda good the next chapters. I think he could do better. Also the half assed "backstory" of olivier doesnt really mean much. He's just a trash that people worship. Cant sympathize with that.

tl;dr I think the author got a complex of trying to make villains more "gray" than just black. But even do this for minor enemies, but badly.

rant end.

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Judge

Status: 20. a whole new world

Jun 11, 2020

The first volume is looking great. The grammar is good and even with some strange paragraphs, history makes up for everything and a bit more.

2-dimensional characters? Comparing with some JP novels I read this is some Warhammer 40K level sh*t.

Romance level: you're crying dumbass. It's raining from my ceiling.

Conclusion: Let me say something. I always wondered what made me, someone who read and studied books, unable to write even a simple history. Wandering on sites like scribble and RR made me realize it with some new works.

I just don't have even a bit of the creativity these authors have. This book is one of these.

Looking forward to the second volume

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HipsterDoge

Status: c83

Aug 11, 2020

first time I've read a yandere story where

1. MC actually likes the yandere

2. Yandere doesn't have some death/blood fetish

3. It's actually a story and not just an abandoned concept

4. It's not harem cringe

I really like it so far and I'm sure I'll enjoy it in the future

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hungneet

Status: --

Jul 17, 2020

This novel is very well-written and deserved a lot more attention. You can tell that the author-san has written this novel with passion.

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andyjh

Status: 20. a whole new world

Jun 11, 2020

if you've reached this point you might as well give it a read you're just looking for something that tells you to give it a chance here I am telling you to give it a chance

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