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I Own a Brothel in Another World
I Own a Brothel in Another World
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WARNING! SOME MINOR SPOILERS MIGHT BE INCLUDED BELOW!

Not much, but at least chapters 1 and 2, which introduce the characters.

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Alastair Carter

The main character of this story, the reader experiences the events as they unfold in front of his eyes.

He's a 27-year-old man, born in Great Britain, living in Sweden as a Marketing and Management teacher for some prodigious youngsters, but not only. He's 177 cm tall, has medium-long straight bountiful hair, with a bit longer backside and also grey coloured eyes. His looks are good, although not that of a model.

He often wears jeans and shirts with different geometrical patterns and on top of that a material jacket, usually beige.

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When the main part of the story starts, he is 28 years old.

In the other world, he usually wears dark brown boots, caramel brown leather pants, a purple shirt and also caramel leather sleeveless vest. On top of that a long walnut brown coat with an open front, dark insides and a nice collar, but not too high.

Paul Fischer

Paul is a 26-year-old man from Germany. His parents manage one of the revolutionary IT businesses. 

He is around 180cm, has very short black hair, brown eyes, and wears rimless glasses. Has a muscular body, but not over the top. He likes to wear military-themed clothes like brown t-shirts, camo jackets and tough pants with heavy boots.

He's quite collected, observant and quiet. Loves airsoft and obviously military things.

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He's 27 when the main premise takes over.

In the other world, he dons a full brown leather armour with chainmail under his vest. A long cape with a hood covers his back. A quiver full of arrows is attached to his belt horizontally. He uses a beautiful, masterfully decorated bow.

Kamil Lewandowski

He is 19-year-old, around 175cm, and a very handsome guy from Poland. His father is a famous streamer and mother a singer. He has short, blond hair on the sides of his head and spiky, pulled up top with dark, dyed tips.

He usually wears sweatshirts with band logos and jeans. He is quite straightforward and sometimes even offensive. Can be bossy and immature at times.

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He is 20 when the main premise takes over.

In the other world, he is usually wearing almost a full plate armour in silvery-blue colour combinations. A strong, reinforced chest plate, greaves, thigh and arm guards. There’s a big shield half of his size on his back, with a hilt of a fancy sword sticking out of it.  A picture-perfect fantasy hero, with a brilliant cape.

Asakura Shino

A 17-year-old petite Japanese girl with quite long black hair, tied up into a ponytail and two cute wisps hanging on the sides of her face, clipped in their middle with metal pins. She has charming purplish eyes and she's 160cm in height. 

She often wears her favourite oversized black hoodie and black pants. She likes to get comfy. In terms of personality, she is quite a shy person, usually stays away from unnecessary contact, but likes spending some time with her closest friends, which also includes Alastair.

She’s a member of one of the emperor bloodline families in Japan. They are upholding the traditions everyone respects. She trains Kendo and loves drawing.

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She's 18 after the prologue.

In the other world, she usually dons dark high boots with white details, black stockings, a short black skirt and a cloth white shirt with long sleeves, wider near the end, and cut-out armpits. Two crossing belts on her waist, with one upholding an ornamental black scabbard of a katana.

Natalie Reevus

Natalie is 16 years old and comes from the USA. She’s the daughter of one of the most well-known Hollywood actors. She's around 169cm in height already, has waist-long blond hair and crystal blue eyes. 

She is a very calm and quiet person, not the shy kind, just quite distanced, lost in her thoughts a lot.

She likes to wear t-shirts with famous quotes or catchphrases, jeans and often black leather jackets.

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She's 17 after the prologue, almost hitting 18 due to her birthday being close to the date of their summoning.

In the other world, she wears tight leather pants, a white shirt and an armoured leather vest. A short cape covers her left shoulder and falls to the back. A rapier by her side and something akin to an acoustic guitar on a belt hangs on her back. On her head, a stylish tricorne with a feather. 

Marcia Santos

Marcia was born in Brazil. Her father owns most of the real estate markets. She's 20-years-old, around 175cm in height, and has bountiful long wavy red hair with green eyes. Her figure is a perfect example of hot and curvy beauty. Her skin is lightly brown and she has some freckles on her beautiful face. She's quite well endowed in the chest area.

She's a party girl, has an easygoing character and likes handsome boys. Doesn't like the limiting views of the society that judge people as immature or even indecent. For the most part, she wears tank tops and material bell bottoms. 

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After the prologue, she's 21 years old.

In the other world, she usually wears a leather tank top and hot pants. Most of her skin uncovered, only her calves and arms are being protected by leather greaves and armguards. Behind her back, two shortswords are hanging down, green and red.

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Rossberg Ruminas

The current king of the Human kingdom Evalitia. He is a tall young man with shoulder-length, straight blond hair and blue eyes. During official meetings, he wears his royal clothes with blue, stylised vest and a fancy cape. A grand, silvery crown decorates his head.

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Spoiler

He quickly grows to like Alastair and starts considering him a close friend after the year he spent around all heroes. There may be much more things that connect the two than he expects.

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Archpriest Nerphym

He is an Archpriest in service of King Rossberg. Another tall man, with waist-long straight white hair. Usually clad with white and blue robes, and holding onto his silver staff decorated with many gems.

Cornelia
She's a Court Magician in service of King Ruminas. She is around 173cm tall, has a hazelnut hair tied up at the back into a bun, wears rectangular glasses. Her eyes are also of the same colour as the hair. She appears to be young but gives strong mature vibes.


She often wears purple robes with cut sides to show her slender legs, and holds onto a long metallic staff, without much decoration.

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Spoiler

During the first year after the summoning, she gets fascinated by Alastair's situation and gets closer to him to study the interesting phenomenon. They spend a lot of time together in the library, studying various languages and magics.

Later, she decides to join Al and help him run the brothel. She couldn't let go of such an interesting individual. And perhaps her thirst for knowledge might not have been the only factor behind that decision.

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Safi and Emi

Two Queen Slimes that Alastair accidentally stumbled on and saved.

Safi, the sapphire Queen Slime, is around his height when in Human form. Her hair imitates something akin to a braid lying on her shoulder. She usually acts well-mannered and composed and a kind, motherly smile paints her face when around Alastair.

Emi, the emerald Queen Slime, is around one head shorter than Al, something like 150cm. Her hair imitates a very tomboyish, short style. She acts very friendly and lively and showers Al with lots of hugs and snuggles at all times.

Sirgia

Sirgia is a Dwarf. Her subrace main characteristic is a quite slim body when compared to other ones. She is 136 cm tall, has long cinnamon-brown hair woven into two braids on the back of her head. They reach almost to her ankles. Her eyes are of a similar shade. She has a long, vertical scar over her left eye, which is healed by Alastair slowly with time, leaving a whitish line behind.

She is 72 years old at the point when she joins Alastair. At first, she is very withdrawn from all interactions, but slowly gains more confidence when being around Al. She loves cooking and creating artifacts and considers the latter her passion. She gets really energetic when talking about it.

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Location
【World】Naharren

A fantasy, medieval-like world, where lots of races live together, although after a lot of wars humans came on top, claiming the title of the strongest race. The world is now filled with discrimination against non-human races.


【Kingdom】Evalitia

One of the biggest human kingdoms, currently under the leadership of King Rossberg Ruminas. During the Great War, most of the human kingdoms united and this is what they became. There are still some smaller ones around the main continent, but they hold insignificant power.

【Place】Alastair's Mansion

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      New Basiun
      Status: c55
      Feb 20, 2021

      So, a 2-star rating - must mean it's bad right? Surprisingly both yes and no.

      It is "properly written" as in the text flows well and the grammar is good.

      The system is quite tailored, but not really playing a role in the story - It lies unused until it needs to appear. There's barely any fighting, as it's not really an action novel - which is fine, especially since there are no random annoying bonus thugs introduced for no reason. Fights just happen when a problem needs to be solved.

      No, the problem which makes this a 2-star goes deeper. The stupid way this is written from start to finish.

      Let's just put a few of the following points into perspective:
      Another world > s*xmancer (power from lewding girls) > Make a brothel? > Make your harem work in brothel?
      Ok, that's weird and won't really work, next:
      ALL demi-humans are subhuman slaves and monsters > Let's make a monster harem > Let's make a monster brothel > Let's buy slaves > Let's feel bad about them being slaves > Let's have the girls fall in love with MC for... quite bland reasons? > Let's give the MC pseudo-mind-control powers and let him be OVERLY self-conscious about it > Let's say "I don't deserve you" every chapter.
      Ok, there are about 10 things wrong there, so let's unwrap. Why have non-humans be subhuman trash in society when you're gonna have a 90% non-human harem and "brothel staff"? It might sound "convincing for the plot", but it's really just useless and serves no purpose.
      Why have them all be slaves or worse and have MC buy them or save them if he's going to act as he does after the fact? In fact, he SHOULD act like that as what he's doing is just as bad as what he thinks it is. He's literally buying slaves and grabbing poor people off the street, feeding them, and having s*x with them, in that order.
      There's also serious confusion up to this point what the point of some stuff is. The system is probably going to be useless due to low action, which makes it mostly pointless. "Romance-Harem-Pornnovel" doesn't really mix. choose 2 out of 3, but never all of them, It's like water and oil, they look quite similar, but they're totally not the same, and any interaction between them gets awkward real fast.
      Why even add the "suggestive mind control" into the story if the main character is going to be a bitch about it? It just falls into the "nono" category of stuff you should avoid in literally any and every novel type.

      Basically what I mean to say is this: You created a story where the MC is self-conscious about his every action, feeling that he's useless trash that no one can like while EVERYONE loves him. Every girl in the story is considered to be subhuman trash, either a slave, a thief, about to be executed or in a similarly sh*tty situation before the MC "Heroically comes to the rescue", charms them up, s*xes them, and then feels self-conscious about having s*xed someone who struggled to eat bread 2 days earlier.
      Did that make sense to anyone? Well, I hope it didn't.

      What I think you should've done: Have the MC explore the world a bit from the start. Find his harem members through journey instead of search and perhaps split the brothel and the harem into 2 categories. Make the society a mix of races rather than human superiority. Written the relationship parts in a more lighthearted/comedic way just like you did with the king.

      The reason it's not a good novel even though it could easily qualify for one is that you built it on a house of cards. Every ground pillar of the story is so fragile that you have to balance all the aspects you want in the story, such as Brothel/System/Relationship/Morals/Story progression on a tightrope when in reality you should've never included some of them from the start.

      The main quirk of this should be the brothel, but how is this going to function in 50+ more chapters? Is he just going to buy more slaves, s*x them, and put them to work like it's normal? I think the brothel part of this story is where the main problem is. It's impossible to write, weird to read and there's no long future to it. TL;DR: It's got a good flow to it and is well-paced, everything else is just built to collapse due to the world it's written in and how the main premise completely clashes with the genres of the novel.

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      Sii
      Status: chapter 7 – your class is…
      Aug 5, 2020

      While a general rule I’ve set for myself has been to read at least 10 chapters, I feel I have enough info to form an opinion. If anything, I’ll come back and update my review at a later date if I feel it’s necessary  

      I can easily say I’ll continue reading. The author has an interesting take on the isekai genre and has decided to take their time building their world with the first bunch of chapters. I look forward to what the author will be putting out for their story. My only issue with the story is that it feels a bit like wish fulfillment/a self-insert MC. I’m not criticizing the author for this, just pointing out that that’s one of my biggest takeaways so far.

      My main qualms with the story have more to do with the technical side of things. Some awkward sentences, tense change problems, and possibly a lack of editing passes before posting chapters have left some typos and misused words behind. These are all fixable and a natural part of any authors growth in the craft. 

      I will also point out for the author, be wary of how your describe your characters, both male and female. I can see that giving in depth descriptions will be necessary for the future of the story, but being mindful doesn’t ever hurt anyone. Make your characters actual people, regardless of gender or how they identify, and your story will be enriched for it. 

      Also, I hope you kill Kamil down the line. But that’s the grim dark fan in me. Lol. 

      You’re doing something right so far. Keep doing it and your story will be fine. 

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      UrsoNadador
      Status: undefined
      Aug 22, 2020

      Hello author, the story has followed a very interesting pace I hope great adventures.

      The only sadness is the low frequency of releases, other than that it has been a lot of fun so far.

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      Rodthereaper
      Status: chapter 12 – first partners
      Aug 24, 2020

      I really really really like the story.I'm not good at reviewing something. But this one is good!

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      Monk_Origins
      Status: 【prologue arc afterword】
      Aug 16, 2020

      Writing could use a second pass, but there isn't many mistakes that will make you stop if you have read stuff online for any amount of time. Fresh perspective, nice writing style, all status boxes are on their respective places. Very readable.

      Prologue length was nice, not too short not too long, and it managed to introduce the system and world concisely. I can only hope that the actual main story is also like this, not rushed while also not dragging.

      If I had to find an issue, it would be the writing speed. :/

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      Venerable
      Status: chapter 5 – the abyssals and system...
      Jul 26, 2020

      There isnt alot of chapters yet, but it's looking promising!

      The same (transported to another world with game mechanics) that we have all seem, but with a few changes to spice it up. The only thing that I have to

      criticize is the weird agression of the boy to the teacher in chapter 5. It felt very forced.  

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