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Total Views (Chapters): | 13,009 |
Average Views: | 1,084 |
Word Count: | 15,571 |
Average Words: | 1,298 |
Pages: | 57 |
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5/5 for the beautiful rock in that picture. Is that flint or volcanic glass?
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Ive read it all and it has alot of potential as a story the only thing I find issue with is the fact that there haven’t been chapters for nearly a week now and im a bit confused on the status of the story
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Didn't even start but was requested politely to write a review so, here I go. Based on the cover photo I see that the author has good taste in rocks which obviously translates to good story writing, if not what does? Good taste aside, any rock enthusiast should check this out maybe you will like it or hate it with a burning passion, who knows? But why not give it a try.
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Despite its popularity and potential, I don't actually like this story.
In my opinion, the story is like an immature child. Not too well thought-out, impulsive and making a lot of poor decisions.
The synposis is a pretty good depiction of the actual story, mixing an actual synopsis, a joke and a plan for future events into a single paragraph. I find it confusing to read.
The rest of the review has spoilers for the first 7 chapters.
The poop death near the start is unusual, but not that bad. People make a mess when they die, so that's fine.
Not reading a contract and laughing your way through everything is confusing (it's much harder to understand what's going on when one half of the conversation isn't playing along). I personally don't like dumb characters, but you get a freebie here. If you want to write a story about reincarnating as a rock, maybe you need something dumb to happen. So I'll forgive that.
Due to time spent as a rock, our protagonist gains a split personality. This split personality then immediately starts wasting resources.
So, negative point number one: the protagonist is an idiot. Or at least holding an idiot ball.
Negative point number two: The story rambles on and on. Paragraphs keep going without end. There's an interlude about what's going on in the original world, and it has no line breaks. Just an endless stream of poop jokes.
Whatever value the plot had died with that interlude.
The story gets worse after that as the protagonist's split personality induces a session of talking to yourself. They're given symbols, rather than names. The rambling turned incomprensible for me there.
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