By CaptainBoyHole
A young teenage girl has awoken inside some random forest with no idea of who she is, where she is, and what is going on.
She will soon discover some answer to her questions while others stay unanswered but there is one thing that she will
It's easy to see that the author have no experience in this type of stories but there is a good base.
1- Is money a living being ? Personnaly I can't understand the price of anything. 2- Emotions are too short ; "Oh ! when I was asleep a divine being that I don't know choose me, I panic... Nah it's okay I have 100 years to do that, easy~" 3- I am under the impression that the time is not fix between the first story and this. kairos said that he will not go Ouradia in hyper-speed but by the the next chapter Quinn was alredy humanoid and the heroine in another city. And the fact that Steve is here... 1 week after the start of the story ?
But I love the fact that we know more on this world and that the gods or their religion are more present.
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