This book is very VERY frustrating. The constant POV change makes the story pacing grind to a halt. There are so many POV changes that in the first 7 chapters there is 5 POV changes. And thats not counting the 3rd person narration sprinkled through out them chapters. The Author states that this book has constant POV changes but damn brah. It's not needed, at all.

I stuck with this story for as long as I did because I love the premise and MC. I even like the MCs best friend. But the female side characters are trash. So trash that I started skipping their POV paragraphs entirely. And thats when I thought "why am I reading this book where I have to skip 2/3s of the chapter to make it enjoyable."

So at chapter 28 I will be dropping this book.  My advice to the author: you don't need all the POV changes. Expecialy if the POV change is just a 2nd person perspective describing what the MC just did. We as the reader have to read the event twice which makes the pace of the book turn tedious.

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This, so far, is a story about an egotistical genius who is thousands of years old and finds life boring, being summoned again as a hero for the 30th time (somewhere between 20-40). This time the world has litrpg elements implemented in it which he has not seen before which he finds interesting so he explores with "vigour". The story contains a lot of jokes which usually involve characters being in absurd situations or the MC doing crazy or weird things because he is an egotistical genius who has a bucket full of screws missing from his head.

The story also switches between multi people, MC, priestess, General, Hero2, hero3 and some side characters near the main characters. I find the priestess is used to fill gaps in where the MC's POV would be boring which is very well done and enjoyable.

the general and hero2 are currently separate stories which seems like they will eventually join the MCs group. Their POV stories are alright, I personally am more interested in MC but their stories are interesting but not enough to write a novel about them by themselves, which I guess is why there is multiple main characters.

all in all I quite like this stroy and will be following it for new chapters

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I love this story

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One of the best story on this site. The only reason the fanbase is small because it's new to this site.

The multiple POV change is very good, adds depth to the story and makes it interesting, the world building is an added bonus.

The MC is not presented as a perfect being but as a person full of flaws which is a good thing.

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Your story is quite good with a anti hero MC, plot between gods and loki as a wildcard.... but aside from MC's and his entourage, other heroes pov are boring af.... and they are very constant too, people would have liked it more as it would only have 1 or 2 for a volume... but that's the only bad thing I can say about this story... other than that, I love it ❤️

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In many ways, I'm glad I didn't pick this up sooner.

The first major arc of the story is wonderful, but it lasts a long, long time. By the time it ended, there simply wasn't much left to read, and boy did I want to read more of the next part. I can't imagine having picked this up when there was nothing but the dungeon. It probably would have felt like the story took ages to actually get anywhere, despite so much happening, and the occasional glimpse of the world outside.

On the other hand, I also feel like there wasn't enough to the first arc, either. As much as I was ready for the story to move on, to expand into the broader world, I still want more of that first dungeon. It was great, and there's so much more that could have been told of that time period. What happened to the dwarven ship? How did the floors interact during those last two years? How did Quasi grow, and his classes develop? (Though, I do like the bit of mystery there).

It's an odd mixture of feelings.

Still, the second arc has been a lot of fun so far, too, and I can't wait to read more of it!

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