Total Views (All): | 769,039 |
---|---|
Total Views (Chapters): | 582,654 |
Average Views: | 3,808 |
Word Count: | 473,530 |
Average Words: | 3,095 |
Pages: | 1,722 |
Member | Status | Activity |
---|---|---|
1 / 153 | 22 hours ago | |
31 / 153 | Apr 25, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 24, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 21, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 21, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 17, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 13, 2024 | |
4 / 153 | Apr 12, 2024 | |
122 / 153 | Apr 7, 2024 | |
12 / 153 | Apr 3, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 2, 2024 | |
14 / 153 | Apr 2, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 2, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Apr 1, 2024 | |
1 / 153 | Mar 26, 2024 |
Read More
I found this story incredibly hard to read. The pacing is incredibly slow to the point that I found it boring. I love the concept behind the story though, I really wanted to like it, but several factors made it uncomfortable to read for me. The first was the pointlessly long descriptions of unimportant events. The second was the double spacing between paragraphs. The third was the excessive commentary offered by the author to justify the horribly slow pacing and pointless descriptions of unimportant backstory elements.
I don't want to be entirely cruel here, even though I only gave 2 stars for the review. The story idea is fantastic and with a few adjustments to the pacing and editing for format the story could be really good.
Read More
Have you ever watched paint dry? Well, me neither until I read this story. You get to watch the paint dry at a speed of 0.25x in all its glory. You get to see paint hardening and slowly getting its structure. Then once it's done and you can finally make out what it is, you see its exactly that. It's a beautiful painting of you making out for the first time. Those precious feelings you felt all return to you when reading this novel. The novel starts off slow but once revealed it's a masterpiece.
If you are not in a rush and can handle assiduous strokes of world-building and character development. I guarantee you will love this!
I wish I could write this well.
Read More
Likes
Dislikes
Overall, this story is interesting and has a clear and well thought out plot and world. The lack of action and conflict, as well as extremely slow pace, hurt it.
Read More
The story has a nice background and character ideas. But its completely without direction. It also often focuses on stuff that just aren't relevant or important. Especially the last few chapters were dreadful to read as they were purely about thoughts and muh! Feelings!
I have no problem with and even love to read technical stuff and detailed descriptions of things, but reading chapter after chapter about for example the MC's relationship to her birth mother is just to much even for me. I suggest rewriting this story and focusing more about actions and less on thoughts and feelings.
Read More
•The author does a good job of balancing the slow pace with interesting descriptions. Although normally I dislike switching perspectives from the MC, it's written in a way where you can see the purpose and shows why a character is acting a certain way.
With the MC having split but intertwining personalities, they "interact" in a way that is different from other reincarnation novels. The readers can actually see the process of these two personalities merging and it clears the way to show the character development.
Along with that, the effort of researching is shown by the different knowledge on topics like myths. This isn't included in a boring way however and can actually be understood.
Besides the occasional misspellings, this novel is really good if you are tired of repeating plot lines. One thing I would say is that if you pick this up as your first reincarnation novel, some of the comments or "cliches" that are avoided might be confusing.
Read More
One of The most realistic Novel you will find in fantasy genre. The realism of character behavior & development has been well thought. But the world building, Writing style is lacking a bit. For a logical novel such as this, the synopsis and the title is very bad. I have ignored this novel just for its name twice already. This name of the novel is long a f. This is what I hate about japanese styled novel. At first I thought the writer was a noob. But he is not.
I m not fan of time skips in "Child protagonist" tagged novel. They timeskip but the character never grows up in power nor in mentality. But in this novel theres no unecessary timeskip. But The character development is over the top here. MC's power up feels slow. But I know its not. Shes still a kid. Still I wanted MC to become strong in fast pace.
Read More
I like it a lot, there's a lot of description which is good, but some people would be put off by the slow age pacing, but personally, I find it better, the thing I hate most in stories is constant big time skips
Read More
I love this story. This is a brilliant story that brings a twist to the whole isekai genre and has some pretty interesting and fleshed out characters. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Read More
I like it very much! It is carefully planned and deliberate! Few if any grammar mistakes! Interesting and large world! The caracters are likeable! The MC is very kind! Come and read it! Worth it!
Im not really used to write a review and im a beginner at english so sorry for my mistakes! But I had to write one now to show my appreciation and my thanks for the author!
By Fufufu
Read More