Lament of a Noble Born
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| Total Views (Chapters): | 28,490 |
| Average Views: | 1,781 |
| Word Count: | 86,933 |
| Average Words: | 5,433 |
| Pages: | 317 |
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- Exam – II (45)
- Interlude – Lector Narsis – Academic Purview (43)
- Exam – III (40)
- Academy – I (37)
- Academy – III (36)
- Academy – V (35)
- Childhood – I (35)
- Interlude – Amiria – A Mother’s Worries (34)
- Prologue (33)
- Exam – I (32)
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- Academy – VDec 10, 2021
- Academy – IVDec 3, 2021
- Academy – IIINov 30, 2021
- Academy – IINov 2, 2021
- Academy – IOct 26, 2021
- Interlude – Lector Narsis – Academic PurviewOct 12, 2021
- Exam – IIIOct 3, 2021
- Exam – IIOct 3, 2021
- Exam – IOct 1, 2021
- Childhood – IVSep 28, 2021
- Childhood – IIISep 28, 2021
- Childhood – IISep 28, 2021
- Interlude – Amiria – A Mother’s WorriesSep 28, 2021
- Childhood – ISep 28, 2021
- PrologueSep 28, 2021
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I would recommend that you have her start a overarching plan as if she does nothing she will die and she knows it. At the moment she is a small girl who can't be expected to do much, but the effort of trying to find a way to save herself and mother would give us a over arching mission to work on. She also needs to try to do something about her mind and she knows that too. She doesn't need to have the answers, but showing us she is trying to work on it would help us connect and feel less disjointed.
Also, your chapters are good, really good. Don't over think them. However a more descriptive novel description might let people know more. I am always afraid of fanfics vs originals, but you don't rely too much on the reader knowing all that and so try to explain the premise so others can follow. Specifically a few more specific details on the setting like my description might help help those get invested.
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