By GamingWolf
Aperio had been a slave for as long as she could remember. She toiled away in the palace of her masters, her body forced to obey, her mind no longer caring that she did. Her only joy was the small inconveniences an error in her work could bring, t
Hey author, I'm the type that hate "calm, serious and confident protagonist" but being nerfed by "the jokes or lame comedy" the worst case scenario is the MC just pathetic b*tch that does not know how to think at all!
I was hoping this could be amazing but you did a great job just to mess it and I'm done only goes for 3 chapters.
Marvelous! You need to be proud for making me this irritated by 3 chapters since you're the first one in my veterans novel reader time.
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The story is good, well developed and thought out, in addition to being well written. But I'm dropping it and giving this grade because there are situations that I don't like or support in stories.
1- MC depends a lot on the system, he doesn't try to learn on his own or even ask the system in advance, he always lets the world fall and then tries to ask for a solution or why it's happening.
2- Many people and even the system itself hiding things from him "for his own good". Some examples being the sister he seeks hiding from him hiding his general situation, and the system and other people hiding what they know about his sister and what goes on around him.
3-MC forgets things he got from the system, updates, purchases or just puts it aside when he's not doing anything or when he's not in a hurry, but when problems arise, he's in the middle of battles or in a hurry, he runs to fix everything he can or receive prizes that are no longer so useful.
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