This topic will be reserved to present some information about the characters already presented. I will expand the information as needed.
Note: will contain some spoilers
1- Tony: Protagonist of the story, a young man with white hair and red eyes. He is a great pervert who will take advantage of the situations that arise, in addition to being very hard at achieving his goals
2- Carla: Tony's older sister, with white hair and red eyes, in addition to her beautiful charming figure. She works a few periods in the library, most of the time she's a calm and caring person, but manages to be shy and rigid at the appropriate times. Its route is the romantic one
3- Nicole: Tony's loving mother, despite having three children, her figure is still beautiful, she spends most of her time taking care of the housework. She cares a lot about her children and hides her true emotions for everyone's sake. Its route is the romantic one
4- Aleska: Tony's aunt and Nicole's younger sister. A very relaxed and liberal woman, her work was basically a prostitute, earning money and felt pleasure from the act, of all women she is more easily accessible because she likes to enjoy life in her own way. she is dual route
5- Lisa: Tony's second eldest sister, as well as the others had a beautiful figure. She works a few periods in the tavern as a decoy to attract customers, her tsundere personality prevents her from saying what she really feels most of the time. she is dual route
So far this is a great story and setting. All I can say is that the grammer could use some work. Try Grammerly or something, it could catch a lot of these issues. Otherwise keep up the good work.
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A pretty good read. As someone already said, grammar needs fixing.
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