This novel has Tsundere, Yandere, Glasses Girl, Slut, Kuudere, Tall Girl, Tanned, Tomboy, MILF, Dark-Skinned, and lots more!!
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For three years Calix has suffered from the Backlash of his undeciphered Term Attribute. The inability to use his Term Attribute, a unique power that everybody develops during their life, he has suffered misfortune and lost faith in himself. A chance encounter with fate has led him to awaken his previously hidden ability - Luck.
"The fuel of my Term Attribute is sexual practices with the opposite gender?"
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Warning:
-THIS IS SMUT WITH A PLOT
-This novel is R-18.
-I can't promise you high-quality content since I write two other stories, I can't put all my time here.
- You may find some errors but I'm confident that this novel will be readable.
-If I don't like the performance of this novel, I will drop this after hundred chaps.
-I only accept a one-star rating.
-I will update 5× a week. Tuesday and Friday
- The plot may become nonsensical sometimes, but it's because of Calix's unique luck. Don't nag me if you found that the plot lacks common sense. This is smut, duh.
-I will put all of my shit here in this story.
- Please leave a shitty review.
-Advance 73 chapters:
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Discord: https://discord.gg/EAcYxbG36Y
(Note, in the first arc, I will show how pathetic the mc so I just want you to be ready.)
In accordance with the author's wishes, I will leave a terrible review. The reasoning for such a wish is beyond me, but who am I to refuse? As such, here is my review:
This novel is extremely boring. Everything makes little to no sense, and when it does make sense the plot is trash. Other than that, the romance is bland and in horrible taste. All in all, a trash novel. How this has stars is completely unknown to me. Don't waste your time.
Note: I refuse to leave a legitimate review. :/
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Protagonist with a sh*t ability compared to others. Not a fun read. If the author wants to tell me when the MC starts being treated like the MC, I'll skip ahead and re-review this story based on that; I'm not wasting more time otherwise.
Essentially he will be luckless, miserable, and perceived as ugly unless he s*xes up his girlfriend, ensuring that he is kinda lucky (still gets the sh*t kicked out of him though) and she is more than 230% luckier than him. He is basically a Beta %@$&-toy and can never have any power unless a woman gives it to him or he becomes a rapist. It is pretty obvious that his ability will result in his eventual kidnapping and serial rape. But don't worry, the author, who apparently must be 12, will make sure that he likes it and falls in love with his rapists (because men love to be raped and are slaves to their d*cks). Grow up!
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My thought on chapters 1-25
It's a story that managed to repeat itself for 20 chapters with little to no progress in the plot. You could tldr/quick/hell even just skip most of the mc's part in the story till chapter 20 and nothing will change. The first and second chapter could and should (imo) be cut out. The MC has super low morale that we the readers have to deal with, but sadly I didn't feel we should have cause I didn't get a good enough reason why I should care about the MC. The MC is super beta which ties into the low morale. The world building is not there other then pretty much on a earth planet, some type of monster, army fights monsters typical system stuff...
Ok now that's the bad now the good.
There is potential here and the author seems to care about the future plot of the story (maybe to much). The female MC (harem member #1) is the best part of the story. Few spelling and grammatical errors. The update speed as of now is pretty quick and the chapters are super short (200 words).
I would have rated this 4 stars but haaaaa damn having to read the first 20 chapters was rough.
Now 26-65 is way better. There still isn't any real world building but main character development is good. The overall flow of the story is better. And still very little amounts of grammatical errors, showing the writer (editor?) is actually checking their work.
I still feel starting around 15-20 is still a valid option cause even now the characters from the early chapters are pretty much introduced again.
And I personally still don't like when the author "injects" their opinion on something "Twilight" for example (don't get me wrong I don't care for either forms of the media) but I just care for that in the middle of the chapter. Why not start a convo in the comments instead?
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The tags promise you a smut story but be warned that parts of the smut are locked behind the author's patreon. I just finished chapter 23 only to find...
"Anyway, visit my Patreon if you want more!!"
... just as we were about to get the only reason anyone here was reading the story, the plot abruptly jumps forward denying the readers what was promised. The plot is fine even though its very repetitive but be informed that the content that was promised is hidden behind a paywall.
On to the story itself, I was relieved to find a modern setting with a (potential) OP protagonist who wasn't a horrible person. The plot is extremely repetitive in the early chapters but has lots of potential. I wish I could read the full story and not the free trial/demo.
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It is not amazing, but it is decent. Most of the chapters right now feel like a big circle. It desperately needs some editing and more planning. Like storyboarding for chapters and an outline for the arcs. You could skip to like 22 and read from there and it would be like 4 star quality, but for most of the novel you'll just be bored. So for now I'm rating it 3 stars, but I'll keep it in my list.
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to keep it short I will say that the story is goood! And by good I mean thiccc!
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The story is somewhat good but sadly the author have trouble of translating it into a proper "novel". The point of view as reader keep moving between 3rd person limited and omniscient. Also there's some details that author just give up on transforming and integrate it into the story and just blatantly tell the reader.
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I would say, excellent yandere and smut. I wish could see more!
Can't wait for next updates~
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For me I think this novel has a good potential, I like how the MC stays honest with his girls only my critics for this novel is I feel like sometimes it is too rush for the lewds to happen, I really like the romance between MC and his first lover, 2nd encounter is meh, and I really like how the interaction between 1st and 2nd girl so far kinda realistic 😂 more chaos please
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