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Table of Contents 24

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024 – Loving HandsJun 24, 2022
023 – Across the River and Back ❤Jun 7, 2022
022 – Ways To Coin (❤)May 12, 2022
021 – Less Than Three StrugglesFeb 7, 2022
020 – Hot Chocolate 🎔Feb 3, 2022
019 – RealizationJan 15, 2022
018 – The Ripening ❤Jan 12, 2022
017 – First KillJan 8, 2022
016 – Rake Quell ❤Jan 1, 2022
015 – Morning Heat ❤Dec 23, 2021
014 – Empty HeadDec 21, 2021
013 – Green CircleDec 19, 2021
012 – Sleepy GrindDec 17, 2021
011 – Loli OctupleDec 13, 2021
010 – Love Jungle ❤Dec 11, 2021

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Ouroboros

Status: 002 – hint to the truth

Jan 8, 2022

Wow. I'm just going to say that you really shouldn't waste your time with this one. Why?

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"My words give him a little hint of where he belongs, beyond the wall."

"Seated in class, an annoying black guy with long blonde hair arrives with a skateboard.
He speaks up to me with a high, no-testosterone voice, trying to get my attention.
“Hey Edward! You good?”
At first glance, when he first spoke to me a few months ago, I though he was just being friendly.
But by the third time, I understood him completely. He’s a persistent, raging gay reject.
He keeps approaching me.
A month ago, I even told him to his face I wasn’t gay. He acted like he didn’t hear me."

"Enhanced Immune System 1 corrected these defects from whatever vaccine I had when I was a child."

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It's ironic because the first girl he hits on is Taiwanese. Even if you ignore the obvious pontification from this writer it's clear from chapter one that he does zero research and likely is the indoors type. Unintentionally funny level of bad advice like suckling out snake venom from the wounds shows up. The racism, homophobia, and clear shilling just made me uninterested. For one? I don't want to read about politics in my fantasy. F**k off with that. For two? Even if it was just your protagonist with these views, which I highly doubt, then I don't want to read about them anyway. He's a sh*t heel that deserves everything karma throws at him.

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