Yasenia is a child born different from the rest, her mother, Tatyana, used an ancient technique she found to absorb the world's energy to get pregnant instead of having regular intercourse. Her objective was to create a lover for herself since the endless years of solitude and all the heartbreaks covered her heart with eternal ice.
While pregnant, a strange soul seems to try to seize the body of her child to be reborn; a shame that Tatyana is someone not to be messed with.
In her rage, she destroys the sense of self and memories, leaving only a husk of the soul, and uses it to nourish Yasenia.
What Tatyana didn't know at that time was that this would change Yasenia in ways she never expected.
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one of the best stories I've ever read that has kept my interest till this day. I love cultivation stories and to me this has to be placed in the top because it's different compared to the other cultivation stories. None of the young master this and that, that you would normally see. you will fall in love with the characters while watching them grow. Truly amazing.
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I like authors openminded s*x scenes. Many people have different preferences I my self hate yaoi/bl. So I think author should write story in her usual writing style.i love about limited Harem members in some books it hard to even remember girls names. Good luck with story author hope you would not drop this and write more more chapters
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This really blew my expectations away. I was expecting something cliche and dumb, but this is very well written and almost if not all the smut scenes were good. I stopped reading though because I don't like threesome or orgies, even if they are all female, they just make me uncomfortable. Although it is expected when it's a harem novel and did expect it, I can't change my preferences lol. (The NTR kink play chapter is what really pushed me to drop lol, even if it doesn't happen again, It just kinda ruined it for me) (it was only between harem members)
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This novel has spoiled me for all other cultivation stories. I'm literally addicted that I have read about 500 chapters in a week. No other sotry have ever made me do that before. The world building is immaculate, the character development is prefect, the way the various relationships are portrayed is simply amazing. Overall this novel is easily 100/100.
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Very well done cultivation harem story. Would definitely recommend reading. Although there is the occasional grammatical error here and there, the author is very accepting of feedback in the comments and fixes what arrives fairly quickly. The characters and relationships are relatable and there is consistent, steady character growth both in the main character and their wives.
This is a harem novel, but nothing feels forced and the author puts extra time and effort into making sure each relationship is consistent, touching, and reasonable. The harem is required by the plot, but the main character themselves doesn't want one and places restrictions on themselves while making the best of their situation.
The Author semi-regularly makes jokes on other cultivation type novels and occasionally breaks the fourth wall. I personally enjoy these small interactions and "inside jokes", as well as how the main characters counter them. When you take the jokes as they come and laugh at the satire, you start to realize that the Author is making a point that this story is their own and doesn't need to follow any of those tropes unless they want to. I find their story all the more enjoyable for it.
Thanks for writing this Mortrexo, I've enjoyed every page so far and look forward to what is yet to come.
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If I rated it strictly on the world building, characters, and novel direction I would probably give this a 4 star. In my selfish opinion though, the author excels at writing the MC in a dominate position. They set up the MC really well for this both emotionally and physically. A lot of the time though, when the author writes the MC in a submissive roll it feels more like someone else was writing a fanfic scene instead of the authors actual work. Of course sometimes it's totally justified and well written, but a lot of the time it just feels... uncomfortable. Even with that criticism I would still probably give it a 4 star.
The thing that eventually broke me was the inconsistency of the details. I'm the type of reader who loves details, I want to know everything about every part of this world the author creates. To their credit, the author really does add a lot of details. The problem is a decent amount of the time these details end up conflicting. For example, Situation A will be deemed impossible. 20 chapters later, Situation A is not only possible, but an active part of the story. Zero explanation as to how or why. Or another example. One of the characters will state that Event A will happen. Several Chapters later, MC can't do Event A because of Issue B. Fast forward 10 chapters and Event A is good to go, Issue B was never resolved or ever mentioned again. Or a character will have done something or been somewhere in the past. But if you follow the timeline, they were suppose to be in a completely different location doing something else.
Look, if you aren't obsessive over details then this probably isn't an issue. If you are just looking for a light read that you don't have to take to serious but can still hold you attention then this is honestly a really good find. Unfortunately my mind just doesn't work like that. Having to stop every couple of chapters and go back to make sure I was wasn't remember wrong eventually just wasn't worth it anymore for me.
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So, this is a cultivation story, a genre that I normally tend to actively avoid, since I simply don't enjoy it. From the cultivation stories I've read before, it always seemed like a cliche-ridden genre, and said cliches weren't the type I enjoyed. Now having read 225 chapters of this story in no more than a week, I feel like I might've been a bit premature in my judgement of the genre.
As someone who never reads cultivation stories, I can't judge how good a cultivation story Heaven, Earth, Me is. With no frame of reference, doing that would be kind of meaningless. So I'll just judge it as I would any other story.
So, let's just talk about my favourite part of this story; the characters. As is typical with harem stories, every character fills somewhat of a niche. There's the cute little sister type, the kuudere, the reliable older sister type, etcetera. The usual, basically. This story, however, doesn't just make these characters flat and 2D and call it a day. No, it has these harem members be more fleshed out than many other harem stories I've seen. These characters aren't given their traits just for the sake of it, but have these traits because of their past, because of things they've experienced. They're no cardboard cutouts, they're actual characters.
And these characters aren't static. If there's one thing I like most about this story, it's the character development. Each character has their own problems, and the story doesn't just solve these in a single chapter. Our protagonist is a beacon of confidence, but never overconfidence, and she tackles the problems of the characters around her with care, not haste. It's a joy to watch these problems get solved step by step, and see the characters grow because of it. And as a bonus, the experience tends to be very wholesome.
Now, of course, this story is smut. Very much so. And my biggest gripe with the story comes from there. The smut itself is written well, and is enjoyable enough to read, but there's a lot of it. I, at least, sometimes decided to just skim over an R-18 rated chapter because I just wanted to continue on with the story. My problem here lies in the fact that some of that character development I praised happens in these chapters. Some major character development, too, at times. Of course, this story has the Smut tag, so I shouldn't really be complaining about there being a lot of it, but it did take a bit of my enjoyment out of it at times when I realized I had missed some developments in the chapter I just skimmed over.
The grammar is top notch, so I have little to say about that. As a newbie to the genre, all the cultivation mumbo jumbo can be a bit overwhelming at times, and somewhat confusing, but context was usually enough to get an understanding. And in cases where that was not the case, it was usually not a big problem.
All in all, one of the better harem stories I've read, one with very enjoyable and dynamic characters, well-written smut and great grammar. I can't say too much about the world building, since it's very much a cultivation world. There is a lot of smut, but that shouldn't be a big problem if you go in expecting it. It has also somehow managed to change my opinions on the cultivation genre. I'd give this 4.5 stars, but since that isn't a thing, I'll be rounding it down for now. Keep up the great work, author
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Pretty good there is a room for improvement but considering that Author is new his novel is readable without doing mental gymnastics with words to make sense of it
Author does not skimp on other body parts of futanari during lemon scenes, MC is not cringy and dense like many others and by authors word harem wont be catch them all but with limit of 5 you can find it on Webnovel by same name
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This series has done what Yasenia has done to her girls.
Utterly ruined me for most if not all other cultivation/wuxia/Xuehan novels. It's now my benchmark even for stories that are "Published/professionally produced".
It's cleanly written aside from minor grammatical errors.
It's compelling and engaging while the s*x isn't 90% of the plot and has relevance aside from just being smut for the sake of smut.
The Character harem is nice and clean with each having their own personality while being manageable in its current numbers. I hate stories that need 20+ members that are superficially the same
It gets top marks from me with an Added Cookie bonus.
🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪.
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Absolutely fantastic the character growth is amazing the storie captivating, and the s*x scenes are good too. Honestly I haven't been able to put it down since I started
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