I hate to be 'that guy' who writes a review on the second chapter, but the writing alone brings it down to a 2-star review. Usually I just wouldn't review and leave well enough alone, but there are no reviews to warn new readers (like myself) about the writing quality.

I read one of the latest released chapters (ch.123 you are very brave for someone so weak), and while the writing is better, it still couldn't be called good (That's 130 chapters in). Not only that, the old chapters haven't been edited at all. 

Personally, I don't want to have to slog through 100+ chapters of terrible writing just for a generic plot which I could mostly understand despite not having read the earlier chapters (I mainly didn't know characters they referred to). Basically, big bad chinese villain searching for MC and like 3 other women, probably related to a coup or something similar. Maybe a marriage struggle?

Hopefully this negative review annoys an actual reader enough to make them write a proper review. 

*Note: Please keep in mind this is simply a warning of the writing quality, and not me taking a dig at the author. I may call the story generic, but that isn't a bad thing (so long as that is what you want to read).

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Fixed more or less the 1° chapter.

Very difficult to read. Too many grammatical errors; the Author should use a corrector (Like Grammarly) before posting because there are parts in Portuguese too.

The concept is very similar to other novels written by JosieGan almost like a copy/paste. Although the novel per se is not identical.

MC is in some situations very stupid (dialog-wise) as of chapter 15. This is the second attempt to read this. Before I lost interest in chapter 6 because of the difficulty in reading which obviously killed the joy of reading.

Author just have to improve the grammar and some things and this will rise in rating... probably.

I'll edit once I reach further chapters.

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It is a good story and I am currently at chapter 186 and it is improving. I recommend to everyone who enjoy story where protagonist is overpowered with harem elements. But the only issue is grammar sometime it is very difficult to understand the sentence. So author if you are interested contact me I will do the proofreading for free for this story.

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If you can ignore the messy auto translation, this is a not-bad fap material. Yes, only as a fap material and it's only at "not bad" level. No more than that.

Not to be enjoyed as reading entertainment material.

1. Cringe dialogues.
2. Absurd events and plot.
3. No world building.
4. Characters development all over the places.
5. And many other sh*ts.

So read at your own discretion

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