Yen Chen reincarnated in a world of Cultivation after a mysterious death. In this cruel world where people die every day can Yen Chen survive to return to his family on Earth? Join Yen Chen's adventure along with his harem through this cruel and dangerous world where only might makes right.
Warning: Grammar gets much better after 50 chapters.
I hate to be 'that guy' who writes a review on the second chapter, but the writing alone brings it down to a 2-star review. Usually I just wouldn't review and leave well enough alone, but there are no reviews to warn new readers (like myself) about the writing quality.
I read one of the latest released chapters (ch.123 you are very brave for someone so weak), and while the writing is better, it still couldn't be called good (That's 130 chapters in). Not only that, the old chapters haven't been edited at all.
Personally, I don't want to have to slog through 100+ chapters of terrible writing just for a generic plot which I could mostly understand despite not having read the earlier chapters (I mainly didn't know characters they referred to). Basically, big bad chinese villain searching for MC and like 3 other women, probably related to a coup or something similar. Maybe a marriage struggle?
Hopefully this negative review annoys an actual reader enough to make them write a proper review.
*Note: Please keep in mind this is simply a warning of the writing quality, and not me taking a dig at the author. I may call the story generic, but that isn't a bad thing (so long as that is what you want to read).
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If you can ignore the messy auto translation, this is a not-bad fap material. Yes, only as a fap material and it's only at "not bad" level. No more than that.
Not to be enjoyed as reading entertainment material.
So read at your own discretion
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The content knocked me out in the first 5 chapters. The estimate is based on the seed and what is very likely to happen next.
I have long passed this stage when I could like such works. Of course I was helped a lot in this: "I Hate Systems". But still, even without this influence, the start is not impressive.
This is a systemic cliché with the Protagonist's intellect like "hentai cheat harem" + "cultivator". That is, the protagonist is a lustful monkey with arrogance.
Author, if you're going to write another piece, don't cram so much plot influence into the system. It doesn't give a sense of achievement. Something like this works in hentai only because of the good visuals.
Also make the reaction more natural, only people under psychotropic substances and just psychos change emotions so drastically. People don't usually jump from deep grief to optimism. And in this case, it killed interest, which was not much anyway.
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i dunno if you read this review but its good to take the advice of number 5
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It is a good story and I am currently at chapter 186 and it is improving. I recommend to everyone who enjoy story where protagonist is overpowered with harem elements. But the only issue is grammar sometime it is very difficult to understand the sentence. It is for smut readers.
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A very good novel, although it has some grammatical errors at the beginning, it improves with each chapter, well, not in the first sixty chapters, but It still gets better as the chapters go by. I recommend giving it a chance😁
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Honestly, before reading it I saw a lot of comments about the grammar and how bad it was and etc so I was already not wanting to read it, I gave it a chance and now I see that this is my top 1 on this easy site, honestly the bad grammar I didn't see since I'm using translator to read so I can't comment, but I know this is a great story for anyone who likes cocky MC, and this MC has a background to be arrogant, unlike the other mc's who are arrogant without any basis, I love how the MC kills without caring and that he protects his wives even from God himself who descends in front of him, I like the system since it's not the ones that piss off the MC, there's not much world building beyond the basics and a simple character building, but it's one of the best +18 I've read here, I love fast-paced stories and this one is perfect if you don't want something like stories that take a long time to develop.
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