Yasenia is a child born different from the rest. Her mother, Tatyana, used an ancient technique she found to absorb the world's energy to get pregnant instead of having regular intercourse. Her objective was to create a lover for herself after the endless years of solitude, and all the heartbreaks that covered her heart in eternal ice.
While pregnant, a strange soul seems to try to seize her child's body to be reborn; a shame that Tatyana is someone not to be messed with.
In her rage, she destroys the sense of self and memories, leaving only a husk of the soul, and uses it to nourish Yasenia. What Tatyana didn't know at that time was that this would change Yasenia in ways she never expected.
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1) Wholesome 2) Anti-routine xianxia 3) Wholesome s*xy scenes YURI / FUTA (really really really rare) 4) High-quality writing (If you want to recognize that in novels, it is usually from details, even the smallest ones) 5) Likeable EQ IQ characters 6) JP vibe (For info, works that fusion jp+chinese vibe are often good. Which is why some CNs that have a comedy kinda like Kazuma are high ranking. And why some jp works are better by having more description like a CN) 7) A good work is a work where you want to kidnap the author to write all the time
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Edit: Note to self. Don't try to write a review when you're emotional.
I'll start out with the negative.
Almost 600 chapters into the story, and the author manages to invalidate about 90% of the main casts personalities and actions throughout the story and the precedents that's been set. I'm honestly confounded about what's going through the authors brain when writing this.
s*xual assault and even people being too aggressive in their approach towards the main cast have always been punished in some way, often harshly up to the point of torture. A physical AND mind rape attempt is made but everyone is magically okay with it because the person said they were sorry. Tje justification is that the person is very strong, which doesn't hold water as other times when it's been strong people they've just delayed their revenge.
It is so completely out of character and so poorly handled narratively that it's now impossible to tell how the MC will actually react in any given situation in the future.
Now, that's the negative out of the way. Unto the positive.
The main cast pretty much hits most of the kink spots for everyone. If you want a smut read that actually has plot, this is the place to be.
The author has quite a gift for imaginative fighting scenes, which never fails in impressing me.
The harem has been kept manageable and kept "real" with their own personalities, quirks, upsides and downsides. It's dynamic with all the positives and negatives. Although, sometimes I do think it's a bit on the "too rosy optimist" side with how divergent some of their personalities are, the author more often than not makes the conflict resolution believable.
One of the best things about the story, to me, is the continuous character development. How each member in the main cast grows and learn to deal with the new and old. That they learn the world isn't black and white, but tinged in greyscale.
Lastly, my biggest hope is that the author finds an editor. The book could use some love and attention to clean up some of the grammar and sentence structures, as it's very evident the author isn't a native English speaker. It would elevate the whole thing to a new level.
To cap it all off, an apology to the author for my original review:
Dear author. You didn't deserve what I dished out there and I'm so sorry for lashing out the way I did. It wasn't fair to you and it wasn't fair to an otherwise very good book.
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Around chapter 550 the character's personality appears to do a 180, and 200 chapters of progression are invalidated. (See the other review regarding the character's forgiveness of someone who tries to rape her and threaten her loved ones)
Later in the story you'll notice the author leaving out key internal dialogue or descriptions, and you'll have to dig through the comment section where the author clears things up. However, I would also recommend avoiding the comments as they're littered with spoilers.
Really disappointing since the first 200 chapters were enjoyable, but I wouldn't recommend getting too invested in the story.
Honestly, this deserves a 1-star rating, but I would rather save people effort if they read the reviews than having this comment not approved by mods
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This is rather... I don't quite want to call it wholesome because it's still very much smut, but it's quite comfortin to read. The main character has what I'd consider "the right" personality for a story like this and it seems like the author is committed to keeping the harem centred around a solid core of 5 girls. Each of them are lovely in their own way. I don't want to go into too much detail but they all have something that really draws you to them. I'm not even sure I could pick a best girl (that's somewhat a lie, I can, it's Cecille but I'm a sucker for her tropes and Angel is a close second).
The bad
The grammar is passable. It's something you can read certainly, but it isn't smooth. It's mostly minor grammar mistakes that inturrupt the flow of the story a bit but nothing so bad I was forced to stop reading. The cultivation is also pretty standard. I wouldn't call it "bad" per say but you've seen it a thousand times already.
The p*rn tags to watch out for
One final thing is that there are some... what I'll call "porn tags" to watch out for. I won't be going over everything, just the ones I think some people may have issues with. I have issues with none of them so... yeah
Futa, Futa on Futa, Incest (Mother-Daughter), Tail Play, Yuri (Girls Love)
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I really should be sleeping, but since I've decided to review another story, I suppose it's too late to jump off the train.
But I'll keep it short. I have a tendency to make it long and detailed. Forgive this scientist for trying to be thorough. In any event...
One— The author is very nice. I feel like it should be said.
Two— The story is very nice. There are occasional dark and tragic and ahahaha-punches-the-wall-meme moments, but the story is very fluff. And violent. Lots of violence. Hehehe...
Ahem... anyway, the grammar is acceptable. Some minor spelling stuff, but the author is very responsive. I think, now that I fell I must say it, that the word you're looking to replace this copious and, at this point, on-character use of "directly" is "instantaneously" or just "instantly". It means to be like the Flash and do very Ka-Chow! ™️ things. The way the story is written is very descriptive, detailing everything that's going on, but it's relatively straightforward, so if anything, it just makes you absorbed in the lore.
Three— The characters. Are. Adorable. I need a stable income so I can join patroon and give headpats. Each of the characters are unique, and provide something to the story, the MC, and the lore. I cannot say much to new readers, except do not be daunted by the 500+ chapters because you will love them all. Especially Yasenia. Especially cute cuddly growling Yassy. I would like to offer humble head pats. If the Queen would give it herself, this lowly mortal would be most delighted.
Four— The relationships are beautifully written. Not the best composition, or English for that matter, that I've read, but I love how the relationships are portrayed. The MC is LOYAL. She is also SMART. She is PRAGMATIC. And she would burn the world if that's what her lover wants. Because that's how it goes. Lovers are special. And on that topic, the MC does have very unique relationships built. I can't go into details, but I like how most people just argue about this and that while our MC is just built different. It's a spoiler, but you'll understand how I feel.
There is incest, but in a way that I've likely never seen before. "Am I your mother, or your lover?" It turns out there was a very easy answer, and people were just too dumb not to see it. Both. Both is good.
The MC doesn't constrain themselves to a singular title. She can have a relationship both as a lover and as a daughter. To be fair, when you think about it, they're not mutually exclusive. Yes, the love they give is fundamentally different, but the expressions of love are not particularly overriding. You can spoil your daughter, and give your love as a woman. You can dote on your lover, and you can still scold or praise them as a mother. The line is extended, perhaps, but it's not like there's a lower line on expressing your love. Her mother's take on relationships is also very unique. Very much how an extremely ol— EXPERIENCED! Extremely experienced young woman would view s*xual relationships. Even if she has to share her body, as long as her daughter's heart belongs to her, filial or otherwise, she doesn't mind her getting other lovers. And I mean lovers. She doesn't just go for anyone. She aims for long-standing commitment. Truly, built different
Our MC isn't a doormat, or a power creep either, she uses everything to her advantage, isn't afraid or pretentious, knows when to listen to advice, and knows to draw a line when it is needed.
Finally— The world building is great. Simply great. I'd recommend just reading it. It's not something that I can explain in a way where you will understand whether you will like it or not. Take the time. Breathe. Stretch. Hit the chapter 1 button.
This portion is a review about the more recent chapters. New arrivals shouldn't read this. It's not even a spoiler. You simply won't understand anything. If you haven't gotten to the ch 560~ part yet, perhaps skip this...
Skip it.
I have a lot of things to say, but the main one I want to talk about is Tengliu, the Harpy Matriarch. It would seem that we are finally seeing the first bout of a sustained violent reaction against her. Understandable. Still, hear me out:
Whatever the reasons for her trying to get close to Yasenia, whether or not it is justifiable for her redemption arc doesn't really matter. Yas is actively trying to make amends simply because there's no point in making a mountain out of a molehill. Yes, she was disrespectful, but what can she do? That's simply how she is. I know some will reason out that that's just using cultural barriers as a way out, and in a way, it is. Because it is a way out. Tengliu is much like Tatyana in this regard. Tatyana doesn't mind who Yas sleeps with for the most part as long as her bottom line is not crossed. Tengliu doesn't mind getting all touchy feely and making out as long as she feels comfortable with it. Though Tatyana's bottom line is that she cares for Yas, and only want Yas to care for her in return. Tengliu is much MUCH younger than Tatyana (Hey, I'm not mentioning your age, so don't break the fourth wall here) and is much more powerful than most, so her stance is more of the standard cultivator mindset: if it didn't work once, maybe you're not putting enough power into it. It's all about compromise, you can't expect to find exactly the right people and instantly clicking with them 100%. Yas didn't want a harem, but she compromised 5 girls. Tatyana put down the foot on the No-men policy. Tengliu wants to get it down. Has doesn't wanna. They'll work it out, and you can't do that while being grumpy about the past. Remember it, but don't dwell on it, as they say.
It seems distasteful, but that's called a cultural gap. Even if Tengliu doesn't find jumping on someone for some casual flings annoying, we, and certainly Yas, do. And even if we think it's perfectly fine to smack the annoying harpy who's senior by thousands of years just because Yas was insulted, Tengliu will certainly find that annoying. Why is the fly making a fuss, right? We have our set of methods to use and methods not to use. It's a "eww" moment to find someone using the latter, especially on yourself. But in any event, what happened, has happened. As the lore stands, Tengliu went too far, because she got too engrossed in her pride when Yas repelled her charm, and it just escalated from there, until our smart MC decided to be the big girl, and DEescalate (using some bigger gun diplomacy). From then on it's a matter of amending the relationship. If it falls through all the same, Yas will deal with it. She may avoid war, but it sure as heck doesn't mean she's not ready to double down. And maybe Yas doesn't like her, but if she doesn't make an effort, the hate won't shift. Someone has to take the first step, and clearly, grandma harpy has got too much face to admit loss, so she might as well be the one to step up. And clearly, it's working. Cute cuddly Yassy always works. How else did she make everyone stronger than her at her home bow at her feet? With purring, growling, and cuteness. Lots of cuteness. Cuteness defeats all evil. And who knows. Grandma harpy has long been in need of progeny. Perhaps once her redemption arc is over she can get in line for the Progenitor doing some, ahem... repopulation stuff. Blurb dragon when?
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It's fun, it's well written, it has great world building, it has great s*x scenes?, and Bob is doing a terrible job fixing the fourth wall. What's not to like right? Right, stop reading this and go read...
What are you still doing here? (ಠ_ಠ) >⌐■-■ Go!!
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This novel is pretty hard to rate as a single entity due to the varying quality depending on what arc you are reading, so let me first "rate" this novel in chapter chunks/arcs based on if you stop reading the novel at that chapter.
* If I were to read this novel from chapter 1-349~ then drop it the final rating would be 5/5 stars, what I consider the intro arcs for this novel.
** If I were to stop reading the novel at chapter 350-635~, I'd probably have written this review as 1/5-star like how others did below which I'll explain in more detail in a bit. (I came close to dropping the novel many times through this chunk of the story, push through it).
*** After what I consider the first half of Distancia Continent arc the novel goes back to being 4/5-star rating, it's tough to gauge when and where this second half of Distancia Continent main arc starts and ends but I'd consider around chapter 650~-750 it starts/ends.
**** Afterwards what I consider the Distancia Continent finale finally starts 750+, I lumped this with the rest of the novel, and it goes back to being peak 5/5-stars.
Let me now start with the negatives because let's be honest, a negative review stops more people starting novels then a positive review helps someone start one, and the 1-star review below stopped me for about a year before I decided to jump back into this novel. (Context, last year I read this novel to chapter 143 but had to put it down because things came up in life, afterwards I decided to start again but the 1-star review below really put me off, but a year later here I am nearly caught up to recent chapters. Chapter 1170 is a good place to stack).
Negatives
The biggest non personal negative would have to be
the attempted rape, and mind rape (but actually there is a worse negative that this overshadows and caused this to happen). It begins at chapter 560, it's not graphic and the MC doesnt actually get raped, just momentary mind raped with something called an [intent]. Basically, one of the racial leaders (a Harpy which are known for lust) tries to f**k the MC. She is considered one of the top powers on this world, let's say if MC was a 6/10 for power she is a 9/10. Now listen, the biggest issue with this whole situation is that the MC has quite literally killed others for A LOT less (looking at her wrong). So, you'd expect the MC would NEVER forgive this character who did this, WRONG. This character also becomes a side character for a bit which really rubbed readers the wrong way which is seen in the chapter comments. This is where my [true] main negative comes from, Yasenia is a terribly written character at first. Yasenia is basically on a small lit fuse; it goes off on anyone disrespecting her. Now I believe the author realized that you can't be having a main character going around killing and punishing anyone for the smallest of offensives, so what did they do? Make Yasenia forgive someone who tried to rape her, because after that she can start forgiving people for less, which she does. This whole subplot takes like 400 chapters to resolve ending on chapter 938, the person isnt killed and is forgiven after a beating. Here is my thought; the author realized that Yasenia as a character was on a ship of no return when it comes to forgiveness, I dont believe she ever forgiven someone. This whole thing is just a convoluted way to change the MC from being an unreasonable person because the way the story was going, she'd be killed by a truly powerful person later on. Which is why the below reviewer stated the MC and cast changed personalities, which I believe was needed.
This second negative also takes place during the same arc, but it's also a personal negative. I'll sum up the comment I left on chapter 635.
Basically one of the minor supporting characters introduced in this arc was a child s*x slave and abused since birth. This world treats humans worse than cattle; they are tools to be used with zero care. This character is picked up at age 27 (considered a grandma in this world for a human), it was stated before she was healed her insides were rearranged from taking horsed sized things inside her, the description of her appearance is quite brutal. This character has zero emotional and zero standard education, she was literally a s*x SLAVE since BIRTH. She was saved and bought by the main cast because one of the MC's wives saw a spark in her when they first saw her. They would have left her if she didnt react in anyway, like being simply dead inside. So, what happens? This character develops feelings for the MC's wife who saved her because WHO WOUDNT in her shoes? Now guess what happens if you read my spoiler above, ? No they don't kill her. MC and the wife quite literally stomp on the girl's feelings, FEELINGS SHE DOESNT UNDERSTAND BECAUSE SHE WAS A s*x SLAVE SINCE BIRTH. This takes place about 4 years after she was rescued, so she had at most 4 years of emotional and technical education. SHE IS BASICALLY A 4-YEAR-OLD. Man, this is one of the main parts that made me almost drop this novel, it also happens only 60 chapters after what happened in my spoiler above. You can probably see me still heated at this. The thing is, one of the main cast's main backgrounds was that she was tortured and raped for 3 DAYS, NOT 27 YEARS SINCE BIRTH, JUST 3 DAYS and this character acts like an emotional wreck for like 40% of the novel. Now how is that fair? Yasenia and her wife treat the s*x slave since birth like garbage but someone who was raped for 3 days like some broken little flower. Yasenia and her wife should have known how to treat this character better by explaining her feelings aren't romantic in nature, but of fondness. But they don't, knowing that this story universe has heart demons that can develop from this stuff, they still just don't care. Afterwards this character is mentioned ONCE saying she got over it, that's literally it. Most of the comments agree with what the MC did which is baffling to me, like do you guys not see the hypocrisy? You can't as an author make your audience hate your MC because that is when the disconnect happens, and readers stop and drop your novel.
I feel the main cast (and by extension you author) are being unfair to Luna. She was clearly raised as a s*x slave since childhood and probably raped since then. The first person in her 27 years of life that didn't either beat, rape, and degrade her not only cleaned and healed her, but also saved her from that hell. Of course you would fall in love with that person, she has ZERO emotional education as it was clearly shown earlier and she has ZERO normal education, maybe just the 4 years after she was saved. But say that again, she is literally a 4-year-old when it comes to EQ (emotions) not to mention she was RAPED for 27~ years straight since birth. Not even mentioning she has a bloodline of succubus, like DUH, maybe tell her about that and explain why she is feeling the way she is feeling. You treat the main cast who are 25+ years old WITH experience as kids. You made Kali an emotional wreck after 3 DAYS of rape and degradation, not to mention 27 YEARS. If you kill off Luna or turn her into some antagonist later on, I'll have to drop this novel, that is my bottom line even though she is some random side character. You can't be that unfair to when writing characters. The way both girls just treated Luna is honestly disgusting and I have no doubt these following chapters Luna will develop heart demons and try to rape Evelyn. The worst thing you can do as an author is making your audience hate the main cast, like what that author of the novel of My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires did to his main character.
This negative also is a symptom of what happened in the first spoiler above.
Yasenia spends the first half of Distancia Continent arc building a sect (over 200 chapters) which were mostly made up of harpies, now guess what happened after the Harpy racial leader tried raping the MC? She goes to the sect and basically every Harpy is shown to have their main loyalty with her (harpies were the core part of the sect). Boom, 200 chapters of sect building wasted, reduced to atoms simply for the lesson that a sect isn't family, it's a business, TWO HUNDRED chapters. 200 chapters that were hard to read to begin with. That is why so many people dropped this story at this arc around this part. Basically the 200 chapters were just sect building, the MC did not power up once, and all that goes down the toilet.
This isnt really a negative, but if you hate infantilism play you might dislike one of the FL characters a lot since each main FL is based on a major kink, one of them being infantilism play. Guess what? I learned I hate infantilism play! The character is still kind of cool, but man the stuff she does makes my insides cringe.
My last negative will just be the spelling and grammar. There has not been a chapter I read without some spelling or grammar errors present. I don't mind this that much considering the author is not a native english speaker which is pretty impressive itself, but if you are someone who hates errors, well get used to it with this story.
Here is my summary for the negative parts of this novel: nearly every negative is due to the first part of Distancia Continent arc. This arc is literally a filter for readers because of how bad it is which is sad because this story really is peak otherwise, which is also why I'll still review this novel as 5/5 stars despite 250~ chapters being semi trash. After reading every negative I wrote you probably think, Huh you actually like this story? Yes, yes I do. Even though I also nearly got filtered at that part I still enjoy the story a lot. I thought really hard on what I should rate this novel, 4 or 5 stars, but I finally decided on 5 stars. This novel really is a weird one to review, but the rest of the novel really scratches that itch I like. This review wasn't really supposed to go over positive parts of the novel, because let us be real, if someone gets interest in a novel they read it, but negative reviews really filter out readers if a novel has bad parts in it. There are also plenty of others who reviewed about the amazing parts of this novel.
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Now I like cultivation stories, ready many and I enjoyed most of them. Plenty were garbage but I still like them cause I guess I don't have taste? I just really enjoy reading. But this is fine. MC and main the cast are fun, the cultivation powers are neat and everything seems thought-out and structured.
Now this story does have smut. Personally I don't care for it? Wait not exactly correct ummm. How do I put this.. I don't hate smut at all, I really don't dislike most troops/tags/whatever really, its just if I'm reading a story I'm not looking for stories with it as the primary reason for me to read a story.
But I can see and understand that plenty don't like that sort of thing. However this story does have decent balance of it compared to others and it mostly only occurs when relevant enough. And sometimes it won't happen for large number of chapters cause it is isn't the time for it. But when it does occur it's well written I guess (like I said don't going out of my way looking for it, so don't have much to compare it too).
What else to say... hmm, the story is weirdly wholesome, each of the main cast has their own unique power set (which is good for cultivation story to have each character to have a moment to shine)
Overall I enjoy the story, good action, characters and plotline so far.
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#### **Overview**
The story follows a Futanari main character (MC) who leads a harem of seven unique members. Each member has a distinct personality, ensuring there’s minimal overlap in their traits. The harem is fully established by Chapter 50, and the relationships are central to the plot. While the story includes NSFW elements, such as explicit scenes and occasional lewd comments (particularly about the MC’s breasts), these moments are balanced with a well-crafted storyline.
#### **Plot and Pacing**
The plot is straightforward, with a few well-placed time skips that keep the narrative engaging. The story features a variety of elements like puzzles, trials, hidden worlds, and inheritances, all of which are written creatively without becoming repetitive. The pacing is generally good, though I felt the MC stayed in one particular world for longer than necessary. Travel between worlds is handled well, with smooth transitions that maintain the story’s momentum.
#### **Character Dynamics**
The MC is a Futanari, though this aspect isn’t explicitly stated until Chapter 7, where the first NSFW scene occurs. Throughout the story, there are subtle hints about her nature, and her role in intimate scenes is usually dominant, except for a few unique situations. The harem members are well-developed, with their own personalities and dynamics that add depth to the story. Incest is present in the narrative, but it’s woven into the plot in a way that feels natural rather than forced.
#### **Writing Quality**
The writing is strong, with no noticeable grammar issues in my reading up to Chapter 1111. However, some reviewers have mentioned minor errors, though these don’t detract from the overall experience. The author is responsive to reader comments, often replying in a timely manner, which adds to the enjoyment of following the story.
#### **NSFW Elements**
The story includes explicit scenes, particularly at the beginning, though these can be skipped without losing the plot’s essence. Lewd comments, both about the MC’s body and in general, are sprinkled throughout the narrative, adding a playful tone. The MC is typically the dominant figure in these scenes, except for a few exceptions where she finds herself in unusual circumstances.
#### **Strengths and Weaknesses**
- **Strengths:** The story excels in world-building, character development, and maintaining reader interest through hidden details that are revealed later. The author’s responsiveness and the engaging plot are major positives.
- **Weaknesses:** Some readers might find the extended stay in one world a bit drawn out, and the occasional grammar issues (though minor) could be improved.
#### **Final Thoughts**
Overall, this is a well-written and engaging story with a unique premise. The combination of a Futanari MC, a diverse harem, and a mix of adventure and NSFW elements makes it stand out. While it has a few minor flaws, the strengths far outweigh them, making it a worthwhile read for fans of the genre.
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I read on other website novel 10/10. The beast mother-daughter duo :). Xianxia + yuri + fluffy + incent = ultimate combo
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