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An absolute banger, I gotta say.

Has a ruthless, fearless, and slightly psychopathic main character.

The side characters are like a mix of game NPC's and nameless joes, with few being frequently brought up in the story, meaning it has a consistent group of side characters that are bound to stay around for a while.

The setting of the story could use a bit of work, but for the most part, I'd say it's good for what its worth.

Then there's the syntax and grammar, oh don't even get me started, now don't go away yet, hear me out. It's bad but not terrible throughout the single-digit chapters, but gets better and better each chapter after that.

Last~ but not least, as far as chapter 18, there has been Gore and Strong Language in amongst other things. There's s*xual Content listed on the series page but other than this- [!SPOILER ALERT!]

-there wasn't anything descriptive... as far as I can tell.

... Welp, I guess that's it, for what it progresses into, has potential for, and is meant to be, I'd say you should give it a read. Just be patient at first, it gets better, I promise.

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I’m gonna be honest here... WHY DID YOU STOP POSTING CHAPTERS 😭😭, bro this has so much potential, all of the beginning chaps themselves give us a little taste of how big this will get if you keep it going, it’s so good please broooo

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Too bad this went on hiatus cause it has potential, it has some grammar errors but it could ignore them.

MC is a prisoner that quickly adapts to new world. It has some game elements, but I think the story would be better without them.

I say it has potential because it has a lot of what a certain type of reader would like. A no-nonsense decisive MC, a very brisk pace, and some s*xy women willing to trade s*x for favors position and survival.

The later I find more interesting than reading about how every girl suddenly gets OP powers just by being near MC. The women introduced so are very different than what we get in other stories as they are practical. One hates MC cause he killed her boyfriend and other is a schemer who just attaches herself to him for power and he knows and respects that.

But I can see the problems and why author may have dropped it. MC is using this as chance to live the life he wants like description says and he already has the power to do so. So where do we go from there? He makes sure to reward people for service so it looks like he will be building a base but so far its hard to see his plan for recruiting when his focus is killing and robbing people. We also know nothing about him. Maybe I missed it, but why was he in jail?

Plus with an MC that starts evil and all signs shows he signs to stay that way and get worse there won't be much room for character development. 

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Synopsis: (no spoilers)

Fletcher an ex convict finds himself out of jail in mysterious circumstances, he is met by a strange world where Zombies roam the land, and people with supernatural abilities fight for survival, the MC is a very mysterious figure not much is known about his past, but his actions speak louder than words, a cruel and decisive personality well suited for an apocalyptic scenario, he seeks power and nothing will stand in his way.

The grammar:

The Grammar is okay, but needs some improvement.

*The latter chapters are solid in terms of grammar*

The characters:

I would say the characters in the story so far are unique, although the Dynamic between the women is a little bit toxic, but I like it, as for the men I think they could be fleshed out a bit more, same for the MC.

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