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I am choosing not to give a rating but just a simple review slash warning.
If you don't like your girls getting tagged by dungeon traps and monsters this isn't for you. There was no warning for this anywhere and that's some extra for sure that deserved a warning.
The first adventurer that shows up, Luna enjoys some tentacle plants and goblins... Vividly describes the vines but skipped over the goblins from what I could tell.
Another thing to be aware of is the inconsistent chapter lengths. Some being just five minute reads and the release cadence seems to be somewhat erratic. The syntax and formatting was okay but certainly could use some editing. The main character is actually pretty decent but the setting and premise are banal and derivative at this point.
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So far this has been a very pleasant read. Well written with little to no grammatical errors, clever word choice, and good structure.
The characters presented thus far actually feel well fleshed out in such a short time. They feel like they have agency, a personality, and can think through plans.
The world building presented is also interesting, and the MC is making the most of the situation. I really like the way the author has thought this through and works through it without a dump of lore to get started.
Highly recommend. The smut is also pretty solid, keep up the good work!
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