For the genres this story encompasses, it's a decent read. I'd summarize it as a somewhat typical self-insert in the style of "what if I could fulfill all my dreams without putting in any effort" with some fantasy elements. High school kid becomes an incubus and gains the muscles, girls, friends, and athletic prowess he's never had. He doesn't even have to learn how to get women off since he has magic saliva.

It takes a bit for him to warm up to his powers, so be patient if you find him acting too wimpy. He grows out of it. Don't expect to see MC make the smartest decisions. He often embodies the phrase "young, dumb, and full of cum." At least his transformation cured his dyslexia and he's working on improving.

I also find myself agreeing with Iris in terms of MC's participation in hockey. He's a supernatural creature against humans. It's not even fair. It's like playing a video game with cheat codes on. It might be amusing for a bit, but the lack of challenge makes it boring pretty quick. To be fair it acts as another avenue to attract women, so it's not entirely without merit on the incubus progression side.

The author is slowly adding more fantasy elements in lieu of the mundane high school ones as the story continues, which is a progression I'm enjoying. It's also refreshing that some of the women in the story feel more fleshed out than being cardboard cutouts meant for MC's conquest.

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This is one of my favourite stories at the moment, combing slice-of-life and DnD-esque urban fantasy, with an engaging plot and world-building. Each character is distinct with their own motivations, and the dialogue feels natural. All of the smut is properly integrated into the plot, well-written, and placed appropriately. There are some minor typos here and there but nothing distracting. Update frequency is fantastic, with long chapters at least twice per week.

There are a couple of scenes that made me question the protagonist's intelligence, but he does smarten up as the story progresses, so if you find it bothering you I strongly recommend you stick with it. The protagonist is an incubus, but he is more of a 'neutral good' character, so don't expect him to use his powers for non-con/dub-con scenes, or perform any evil deeds. He doesn't start off that smart or particularly strong, but he is slowly but surely developing as he comes to learn about his own powers, as well as the world and beings around him. I'm excited to learn more and see how this develops further.

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This is one of the better stories on here.

The story is as promised. It is predominately a bunch of supernatural s*x scenes with a bevy of interesting women. The author tosses in just enough combat and magical politics to keep you hooked. There is just enough conflict that it doesn't get boring. I like that the author chose not to go evil with the MC as he is more interesting and the story doesn't get gross. The female characters are more developed than you usually see in stories like this. 

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This is one of my favorite stories on SH. I look forward to updates each week.

The s*x is great, the world is great, the harem is great. I like that the MC has morals and is trying hard not to succumb to the monster. I imagine that will be why he'll succeed when other incubi on Earth have not.

I like that his powers are developing slowly and I think we have a long story ahead of us.

I like that many of the encounters are based on the D&D monsters, as that sets some basic parameters/expectations for readers. I still think the story would be slightly better if the 'victim' arousal was based more on technique, so that he had to work at it a little more, but it's very entertaining and a great read either way.

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Very good story with s*x scenes.

Cons:

MC too soft, dont use his powers more for s*x. 

Dont have s*x with some people due to bullsh*t morals.

MC also abit dumb and quite beta.

During s*x keep talking about gathering life energy, very distracting. Could be mentioned at the end instead.

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Definitely a great story. I cannot begin to explain how nice it is to have a protagonist like this that doesn't just abuse his powers. He really does a lot of thinking, first he asks himself can I do this, then he asks should I do this. It's very well done and he is very logical when he answers the questions. It's a huge breath of fresh air to have a protagonist in this sort of story that doesn't have s*x with every woman he possibly can.

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