A manly guy get chosen by a pink bird to become a magical girl. It is heavily inspired by games like trance female fantasy, monster girl island, and magical camp.
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This is far more of a tf novel + kingdom builder than a magical girl fiction.
Dialogue is hit or miss, with conversations repeating 3 or more times across several chapters. Characters are inconsistent. Intended images are all broken.
Grammar is fine for the most part, but often comes across as being translated. It remains an entertaining read regardless of the inelegant handling of the subject matter.
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