The dialogue is simply atrocious and barely makes sense. Before writing the author should improve his English to an acceptable level first or simply hire an editor. Otherwise this thing is just garbage.

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majimew

Status: c41

Jun 13, 2023

Kind of bliss.

I love the idea and I can see the effort that has been put in. There's interesting stuff here and a lot of potential with this idea. The vocabulary also isn't bad.

What really makes me feel conflicted about this is the grammar. I'm not expecting anything professional. Just simple English without any clear mistakes. Author should get an editor or idk, at least run it through a software or something. Because this is really good, it's just that the grammar is fairly unbearable.

I'm changing this review now later on. It actually does in fact get good. Early on, grammar was complete garbage, and it had the essence of a sh*t story with complete wish fulfillment and nothing else. But as I keep reading it though, it's astounding to see the author slowly get better at English, develop the characters and make good changes from the original. Sure, there are still mixups but it improves every chapter as you read it.

Great story to turn your brain off to, if you can handle some poor grammar here and there. 3.7/5

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Temporal

Status: Duel

Aug 6, 2023

Currently pretty good, but the protagonist seems overpowered. I also have little understanding of "The Irregular in Magic High" so I would have no clue about the story's background. It is 100% encouraged to at least have some understanding of the anime since the novel would not be describing it to you outright. Sometimes the dialogue feels a bit too dragged out but since it's a Slice of Life genre, it's fine. There is both action and slice of life aspects...

As for the grammar, my brain typically just corrects any mistakes as long as it isn't too prominent. There are some mistakes here and there, such as misplaced usage of semi-colons or poor placement of words, but it is readable. Personally, unless the grammar is an actual joke, which further interferes with my reading (and that is a big one since I read MTL), I won't factor it into my rating.

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Meliodas300

Status: shinobi shrine

Jan 28, 2023

I like Irregular at the Magic High School, so I hope that this story includes magic and other aspects which are important in the show, but I would like to see a personal touch of the author to the story.

The MC seems overpowered, but I hope he trains himself and his abilities.

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Axeron

Status: school rooftop

Sep 9, 2023

It's one of those enjoyable novels where MC has a system and OP stuff. Mostly it's also because MC interacts in a very interesting way with the original plot and characters. And overall, author's decision making is great.

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Lady_Luck

Status: school rooftop

Aug 29, 2023

I quite enjoy it. It gets progressively better and it's clear the author has improved while writing this.

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