The dialogue is simply atrocious and barely makes sense. Before writing the author should improve his English to an acceptable level first or simply hire an editor. Otherwise this thing is just garbage.
I love the idea and I can see the effort that has been put in. There's interesting stuff here and a lot of potential with this idea. The vocabulary also isn't bad.
What really makes me feel conflicted about this is the grammar. I'm not expecting anything professional. Just simple English without any clear mistakes. Author should get an editor or idk, at least run it through a software or something. Because this is really good, it's just that the grammar is fairly unbearable.
I'm changing this review now later on. It actually does in fact get good. Early on, grammar was complete garbage, and it had the essence of a sh*t story with complete wish fulfillment and nothing else. But as I keep reading it though, it's astounding to see the author slowly get better at English, develop the characters and make good changes from the original. Sure, there are still mixups but it improves every chapter as you read it.
Great story to turn your brain off to, if you can handle some poor grammar here and there. 3.7/5
Currently pretty good, but the protagonist seems overpowered. I also have little understanding of "The Irregular in Magic High" so I would have no clue about the story's background. It is 100% encouraged to at least have some understanding of the anime since the novel would not be describing it to you outright. Sometimes the dialogue feels a bit too dragged out but since it's a Slice of Life genre, it's fine. There is both action and slice of life aspects...
As for the grammar, my brain typically just corrects any mistakes as long as it isn't too prominent. There are some mistakes here and there, such as misplaced usage of semi-colons or poor placement of words, but it is readable. Personally, unless the grammar is an actual joke, which further interferes with my reading (and that is a big one since I read MTL), I won't factor it into my rating.
I like Irregular at the Magic High School, so I hope that this story includes magic and other aspects which are important in the show, but I would like to see a personal touch of the author to the story.
The MC seems overpowered, but I hope he trains himself and his abilities.
It's one of those enjoyable novels where MC has a system and OP stuff. Mostly it's also because MC interacts in a very interesting way with the original plot and characters. And overall, author's decision making is great.
One day a blind boy got hit by a truck thinking that his life come to an end but rather than being scared.
he was feeling happy thinking that he finally not be a burden to his family as he died with a smile on his face.
but instead,
Si Vis Pacem -‖- Para Bellum [Naruto FanFic]
Death claims all of us in a timely fashion, but some are granted a second chance.
Armed with ambition, megalomania, and pride alone, an innocent girl reincarnates into the vast world of
A prodigy born with a godly quirk and forced into being a hero and living a life he despises, all for the sake of his parents.
OP MC from the beginning, NO HAREM so please just don’t ask.
QUIRK: Hand Of God(Ope-Ope No Mi)
{Hey, you better get up and do some introduction to the readers who want to try the story.} the author said.
I woke up groggily and looked at the time, “Dude, it’s four in the morning.” I said and went back to sleep.
[A Harry Potter Fanfic]
In this Harry Potter fanfic, a young boy is reborn into the wizarding world and embarks on a remarkable journey. After graduating from school, he adopts a hidden persona and delves into the secretive aspects of the Br
The dialogue is simply atrocious and barely makes sense. Before writing the author should improve his English to an acceptable level first or simply hire an editor. Otherwise this thing is just garbage.
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Kind of bliss.
I love the idea and I can see the effort that has been put in. There's interesting stuff here and a lot of potential with this idea. The vocabulary also isn't bad.
What really makes me feel conflicted about this is the grammar. I'm not expecting anything professional. Just simple English without any clear mistakes. Author should get an editor or idk, at least run it through a software or something. Because this is really good, it's just that the grammar is fairly unbearable.
I'm changing this review now later on. It actually does in fact get good. Early on, grammar was complete garbage, and it had the essence of a sh*t story with complete wish fulfillment and nothing else. But as I keep reading it though, it's astounding to see the author slowly get better at English, develop the characters and make good changes from the original. Sure, there are still mixups but it improves every chapter as you read it.
Great story to turn your brain off to, if you can handle some poor grammar here and there. 3.7/5
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Currently pretty good, but the protagonist seems overpowered. I also have little understanding of "The Irregular in Magic High" so I would have no clue about the story's background. It is 100% encouraged to at least have some understanding of the anime since the novel would not be describing it to you outright. Sometimes the dialogue feels a bit too dragged out but since it's a Slice of Life genre, it's fine. There is both action and slice of life aspects...
As for the grammar, my brain typically just corrects any mistakes as long as it isn't too prominent. There are some mistakes here and there, such as misplaced usage of semi-colons or poor placement of words, but it is readable. Personally, unless the grammar is an actual joke, which further interferes with my reading (and that is a big one since I read MTL), I won't factor it into my rating.
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I like Irregular at the Magic High School, so I hope that this story includes magic and other aspects which are important in the show, but I would like to see a personal touch of the author to the story.
The MC seems overpowered, but I hope he trains himself and his abilities.
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It's one of those enjoyable novels where MC has a system and OP stuff. Mostly it's also because MC interacts in a very interesting way with the original plot and characters. And overall, author's decision making is great.
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I quite enjoy it. It gets progressively better and it's clear the author has improved while writing this.
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