The story is very interesting and has characters that you can enjoy shortly after they're introduced.

As the tags suggest, the transformation of the protagonist is slow, almost torturously so at times. With the upload patterns, it is not that bad, however. 

The further the series progresses, the more changes are bestowed upon the protagonist.

It leaves you wondering who to root for. The protagonist, who wishes to maintain his own self, or the demon, who needs the protagonist's life to do the same.

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I am sorry, but it has become too "hopeless" for me. I am completely fine with most body changes (I am completely fine with things like the tyranids or zerg and their series form of body horror), but having a trans, I assume or at least something in that corner seeing how Micki feels about her new form and her reluctance at reverting to the old one, person locked or morphed into a wrong body after a transformation to a more fitting one is one step too far for me. And I could live with that, if it were temporary/well handled, but the violation of her mind, her very core of existence and self, being freely manipulated and her perception of self being twisted so completely and without even a hint of perception of this fact by herself until after the event, both by Spencer's commands, though the manipulation isn't even detected after the fact even though it very much should (who in their right mind would put themselves in a straightjacket without special circumstances and not notice such a blatantly obvious flaw in logic?) and now Mary, who has come completely blind-side for our MC, which also shouldn't have happened, as they are currently in a hostile environment and just up and trusted an unknown person, giving name, permission to enter the dream and even alter it, while very possibly under "attack" by another one of Spencer's manipulations or a myriad of other possibilities. All in all I have to say that the charakters are fairly well made and enjoyable, especially with the in-depth introspection and gradual self-exploration, but there have now been a couple of problems even with that and the bad arc right now feels too... forced, for lack of a better word. There were other ways of getting the MC into a bad situation like we have right now, other than higher power. The higher power being mind control that is capable of turning your mood, intention and action 180° around with just a few words. The MC could have been prepared, warned and in a good position and it would still not have made a single difference, as the scene with Spencer right after the Sadist-Harpy-Nun made perfectly clear. But for me personally there is one very important thing, which is why this very chapter is the straw that broke the camel's back: The change back into the other gender, at pretty much her own hand (or succubus powers) and even the mentioning of the potential or rather the use of the phrase "...I lock thee..." in conjunction with "... bind thee by thy name..." very problematic, as it connects her new name, her chosen female/neutral name, with a male/wrong body. That can be very painful for anyone already struggling with dysphoria. Combining that with your "gender bender" genre tag and "tansgender" content tag I have even debated reporting this story, as it has very much hurt my heart and made me upset enough to bring me to tears. This kind of situation should also, if the charakter is done well enough which I would say you have managed mostly so far, leave serious mental scars, which I emotionally can not cope well enough with in real life to be able to withstand reading about it. You both (AI and Editor/Author) have done pretty well so far with this story, better than a lot of others on this site. There have been a couple little things and the story has some room for improvement, as I have pointed out briefly above, but no one is perfect and the story was all in all an enjoyable read until now. That is it from me, hope you will continue with your good work and not let this comment impact you too much. Goodbye and maybe until future stories.

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One of the best novels I ever read in my time here on scribble hub. It is dark especially post ch. 35 but I really love the character development

Edit: how I already said once vol. 1 is finished I will write a bit more so here I am. The ending was great! I really loved the last few chapters and hope volume 2 completely shatters my expectations ;D I would love some more "peaceful" chapters especially after the last like 15 chapters but that's to the author to decide. I was really sceptical when the mind controll stuff first appeared but it turned out pretty good in my opinion. The grammar Is good and I like the fact that I don't feel the plot armor as much as I do with other books

Imma update this once vol. 2 Is fully out.

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love the book I can't wait for more. The only complaint I have would probably be that the writing may need some more editing to make it transfer more smoothly to the next chapter.

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