I am amazed. It's been a while since I've read an erotic novel that isn't repulsive, and most surprisingly, you've tackled a theme that several authors have unsuccessfully exploited, resulting in novels written by pubescents. Yours, on the other hand, is a masterpiece. You should consider writing a completely original novel, perhaps it will achieve the success you deserve.
I must say this story was well done with nice smut plot and how it happened. While this have mind control, it's more of a subtle thing than outright mind control. If you think of those doujins with a certain app from cellphone to mind control women, that doesn't happen. Nothing like that! He doesn't exactly control Wonder Woman like you think.
And like what other reviews said, it's more like a bad thing going in direction to a good ending. Who would have thought a story with mind control would have a nice ending? Surely not me but I'm here and giving a nice review! Go on and read the story, you will not regret and probably you're going to enjoy a lot!
This is very well written smut and even if you are like me, who hates every kind of mind f**kery, this borders more of a master/servant releationship and is more similar to giving away control for plesure to real life bondage... but this is a world of supers, metas and magic.
It's a good erotic story, but it's also romance and not nearly as dark or hardcore as one would suspect. Different from most mind control stories the main character doesn't want to humiliate Wonder Woman he wants to date her and the story makes sure to show his "qualifications" for it (handsome, rich, smart, etc...), so this is less a mind control hentai and more like a female-targeted urban fantasy (you know the type: obsessive and twisted male lead, who uses scumbag means to get close to the female lead, but somehow they end up as a happy couple), the main character also goes out of his way to not cause problems to uninvolved people (for example: makes sure that security guards don't lose their job, by leaving no evidence that they failed at their job)
Ps: I'm only curious about the Black Canary and Threesome tags, because the main character doesn't seem interested to get anyone other than Wonder Woman and can't use the same trick he used on Wonder Woman
This novel has Tsundere, Yandere, Glasses Girl, Slut, Kuudere, Tall Girl, Tanned, Tomboy, MILF, Dark-Skinned, and lots more!!
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I am amazed. It's been a while since I've read an erotic novel that isn't repulsive, and most surprisingly, you've tackled a theme that several authors have unsuccessfully exploited, resulting in novels written by pubescents. Yours, on the other hand, is a masterpiece. You should consider writing a completely original novel, perhaps it will achieve the success you deserve.
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I must say this story was well done with nice smut plot and how it happened. While this have mind control, it's more of a subtle thing than outright mind control. If you think of those doujins with a certain app from cellphone to mind control women, that doesn't happen. Nothing like that! He doesn't exactly control Wonder Woman like you think.
And like what other reviews said, it's more like a bad thing going in direction to a good ending. Who would have thought a story with mind control would have a nice ending? Surely not me but I'm here and giving a nice review! Go on and read the story, you will not regret and probably you're going to enjoy a lot!
Read More
This is very well written smut and even if you are like me, who hates every kind of mind f**kery, this borders more of a master/servant releationship and is more similar to giving away control for plesure to real life bondage... but this is a world of supers, metas and magic.
Read More
It's a good erotic story, but it's also romance and not nearly as dark or hardcore as one would suspect. Different from most mind control stories the main character doesn't want to humiliate Wonder Woman he wants to date her and the story makes sure to show his "qualifications" for it (handsome, rich, smart, etc...), so this is less a mind control hentai and more like a female-targeted urban fantasy (you know the type: obsessive and twisted male lead, who uses scumbag means to get close to the female lead, but somehow they end up as a happy couple), the main character also goes out of his way to not cause problems to uninvolved people (for example: makes sure that security guards don't lose their job, by leaving no evidence that they failed at their job)
Ps: I'm only curious about the Black Canary and Threesome tags, because the main character doesn't seem interested to get anyone other than Wonder Woman and can't use the same trick he used on Wonder Woman
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