Great story, great writing and a very interesting take on Naruto. One thing to note is that "Sasuke" is literally, LITERALLY, a monster in human skin, so judging 'it' by human standards isn't fair. A nice spotlight is shined on the underrepresented parts of the universe, genjutsu, sealing arts, encryption, stealth, and poisons. These contribute to make "Sasuke" less of a explosive powerhouse like we see in your standard Naruto fanfic (though he is capable of it) and more of a lethal and manipulative force acting just out of your reach and perception.

 I highly recommend reading this if you're looking for a little bit of spy thriller vibe with some espionage and intrigue sprinkled into your "Ninja world".

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Havent read it yet but who said naruto ninjas werent stealthy? 

there a different kinds of stealth 

but at its core stealth is having no witnesses 

killing everyone is a kind of stealth since there arent any witnesses 

only reason we dont see much stealth is because the participants are roughly eaqual in strength so their awarenes is vastly different from civies 

you think civies or genin can see veteran ninjas fight?? 

it would all be blurs 

you think Civies could see rock lee kill a man when he moves at the speed of sound while also removing the sonic boom so you only hear a woosh of wind? 

poisons were underutalized? 

what

naruto almost died several times to poison and only lived cuz hes an uzumaki, a jinjuriki and cuz of sakura and tsunade

and because fate said so

jiraya was piosoned by tsunade, got his chakra supressed and couldnt fight at all and needed to get healed by shizune to actually move move chakra again despite being teammates with orochimaru and the greatest medic alive 

you think he wouldnt be wholely immune to a loads of different posions? 

normal ass ninjas would f**kin die like flies 

all ninja are stealthy 

the show just lets us see the flashy sh*t so we dont always see blurs and boring stealth missions all the time 

plus its shonen so most of the audience are teens with short attention spans 

so theres also that 

anyway this aint a critique on the work just the synopsis 

just passin through the updates dont mind me 

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