By ImagineMaker
Celestial Dragon Mark Rose has a secret, he is from another world.
A world where this world was considered fiction.
But Mark is not your average joe, through a whole lot of pride and a flexible mind, he will make something of himself,
Story idea was a bit redundant but had the promise of being familiar and fun. Unfortunately there are many problems with this story that are common in a lot of the stories on this site. The pacing is bad which kind of ruins the enjoyment of reading it (I read several chapters). There are giant plot holes in the story from the very start. Bad grammar and simple sentences are common. It is clearly a wish fulfillment story which is meh but can be overlooked if handled with a little finesse, which it is not. The characters are bland and do illogical things because... plot armor.
The dialogue is probably the worst part. It isn’t even really dialogue, but just telling the story through conversations that no one would ever actually speak.
I would not recommend reading unless a serious edit and rewrite takes place. Hopefully that happens, as the author seems to love the characters enough to put the effort into writing it in the first place and I would love to be able to enjoy reading it.
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