In the thrilling and epic tale of this story, we follow the extraordinary journey of Dante, an ordinary man who finds himself thrust into the marvelous world of Marvel. Set in a universe where technology has advanced beyond imagination, Dante's life takes an unprecedented turn when he becomes Spiderman along with the aid of a system which can steal and upgrade his abilities.
Whether it is his Spiderman abilities or other skills such as coding and becoming a scientist, Dante has the power to slowly upgrade them all after gaining enough system points.
[Ding!
Congratulations on stealing a new ability, Please add stat points to increase its strength!]
Yes, this is harem (Best marvel girls only)
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Main character is portrayed as not being able to remember certain parts of the movies, so have some patience with certain events.
Story idea was a bit redundant but had the promise of being familiar and fun. Unfortunately there are many problems with this story that are common in a lot of the stories on this site. The pacing is bad which kind of ruins the enjoyment of reading it (I read several chapters). There are giant plot holes in the story from the very start. Bad grammar and simple sentences are common. It is clearly a wish fulfillment story which is meh but can be overlooked if handled with a little finesse, which it is not. The characters are bland and do illogical things because... plot armor.
The dialogue is probably the worst part. It isn’t even really dialogue, but just telling the story through conversations that no one would ever actually speak.
I would not recommend reading unless a serious edit and rewrite takes place. Hopefully that happens, as the author seems to love the characters enough to put the effort into writing it in the first place and I would love to be able to enjoy reading it.
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