Enjoying it so far.

The story is slow burn, so don't expect conflict from the start. Those 10 or so initial chapters serve as an introduction to the world.

The MC so far is fine. Not a wuss but also not a gigachad, which means he's believeble. I can't indentify the yandere love interest yet (I'm assuming it's the dullahan maid?), but bonus points for having one.

For the author, the only things I'd change are:

- Add a few more tags: I think it would help with discoverability here on SH. I can think of a few that would fit this story, like 'Animal Characteristics', 'Clumsy Love Interests', 'Fantasy Creatures', etc.

- A new cover: The one being used currently is not bad, but I think it's using the wrong proportions. Since it's the first thing people see when they're searching your book, I think it's important to make it pop-out.

EDIT: Updating my review to show that the absolute madlad actually made the changes above. The new cover is pretty good and he added new tags!

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