[--- Hiatus ---] Do not expect more at the moment, Thank you to all that have enjoyed.
If someone on Earth dies a humiliating enough death, they might just be Reborn in the fantasy world of Oneiros.
Evelyn Burkhardt, a burnt-out corporate businesswoman receives that ignominious distinction.
Her awakening takes place in a world filled with magic, time-displaced locals, eclectic fantasy races, and rampaging monsters threatening to tear it all down.
Heart of the Party is about the interpersonal relationships between complicated, flawed individuals and the struggles they face.
Evelyn will have to learn to navigate a new body, an assortment of budding romantic relationships, hunting terrifying monsters, growing political intrigue, and sinister evil schemes.
Maps and Character Bios is the Glossary. (Heck AI, I removed the images I could, save a few icons on cassette tapes)
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Everything this story does, it does well.
Good story, good characters, good smut
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Trying to sum up everything I like about this story without just saying "this is good, you should read it." is incredibly difficult. That said... This is good, you should read it.
My absolute favorite part of this story is the characters. I think their inner lives and desires are well thought out, their narrations all feel different, and I personally love how their temporal displacement affects them. Before I found the Glossary (which is fantastic and has images of the characters in addition to blurbs about them), I already had a pretty solid idea of when they came from just due to how they see the world and interact with other characters. One of my particular favorites is how Liv conceptualizes her skills, which is explored in Chapter 22.
Furthermore, I think you've done an excellent job seeding future plotlines and I want to know more. How does the main character's functionally miniscule mana pool, but comparatively massive efficiency at casting spells affect her growth going forward? How does their efforts to overthrow this small town go? Are we going to see the bee girl again I like the bee girl she seems sweet :))
All in all, this is a fantastic story that I hope you come back to at some point in the future, but I will be thinking about this story in all my writing going forward.
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