A major disappointment is what this novel turned into, the author dropping any semblance of a proper dimensional traveling story into one purely of smut... This had such great potential and a wonderful idea with the multiple worlds he can travel to, but I guess the author is a teenager IRL and his lust got the better of him, causing the downfall of this potential great story. Read it if all you want is quick smut with a slight amount (barely) of proper world adventuring action. Hell even the smut isn't that great so it's even further a shame that the author did this.

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I cant stand it. Im only reading this sh*t bcs concept of this story is good but author ruined it with his bad MC (not cool type but crying weak minded and lustful type, simply speaking looser) f**king sh*tton of smut, im not against some smut I also enjoy some smut in stories but holy f**k in this is more s*x than f**king story. 

That was really awesome idea with diffrent world etc and I gave it f**king 10 chances, once quit and return in hope to it get better but im suprised maybe author just writing that sh*t for only show others that he is mentally challenged or smth. 

I once again say THIS IDEA WAS GOOD but story when MC get smut related ability Chikyugan is when this dropped rock bottom. 

Disappointment isnt even describing what I feel. Like something that would turn into diamond turned to sh*t it really hurts. Only people that like it are max 15yo or they started reading fanfics/novels in general or they have something wrong in head. 

I really made that long ass review first time in my life just to show my regret lmao I wont do it again this is really annoying Just saying

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The manga world-hopping story started with promise, and could theoretically return to something more solid, but bogged down with HPS: Harem Protagonist Syndrome midway through Book 1.  

The basis of the story is an 40-something overweight male, married father of 2 children (MC) appears in a room with no memory of how he arrived (he remembers his old life, but not how he came to be inside the "Red Room" where the story begins, jumping between worlds. The system introduced in the story grants fiction-world related quests and rewards. The protagonist works alongside (so far, not replacing) story-world protagonists in order to fix elements of those stories, develop side-stories with cannon side-characters, with a focus on keeping the plot moving forward, and generally achieving better outcomes in the story than were originally seen and/or resolving the stories. Rewards grant enhanced abilities which help the MC the more difficult story-worlds like improved strength, chakra (or increases to the chakra pool), weapons, armor, system storage, and... sadly the Achilles heel of the story "lust aura" powers.

I would say that while the story is very wish-fulfillment centric, the MCs choices are reasonable and logical (until his bloodline activates) and that the author had the ability to tell a legit fun story based on fanfiction. Even a bit-o-lemon in the story, originally, was reasonable and justified.

Side Note: Personally, I find it offensive that he is taking his sweet time, focusing his energy on s*xing his way across the fictional universe, longing for his fictional s*x partners, and hasn't spared much thought or affection for his real-world CHILDREN WHO ARE ALIVE AND MAY NEED TO BE RESCUED (or wife, but she is totally off hi scumbag radar) ; obviously strange things happened that resulted in his stay in the red room.  

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tldr: If you want power fantasy with power scaling that is more or less linear for the MC, ie he gets stronger in measured way, if you like a competent MC, if like canon plot to be changed: DO NOT READ. MC power scale is slow, other characters reach his same level in less time with less abilities than him, canon plot does not change (not in an important way, some character survived? Sure, but otherwise everything continues as normal), the MC is overall competent... until the plot has to happen in a certain way and then he makes mistakes. Every fight, and I mean EVERY big fight he starts the fight, queue next scene the MC wakes up "What happened? did I win?" I kid you not, this happened at least 6 times.

The story... started okay, it had its ups and downs, some moments were very good, it slow got worse and eventually got much worse.

I blame the author 100% on the bad part, ie he didn't write the novel in a way I just don't like, he wrote things that forced the MC to be stupid:

Another bad thing:

The author invalidates a lot of the story by forcing the MC to do stupid things, and it slowly getting worse in the novel, my opinion is, that the author just has no plans and doesn't really think about what he writes.

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The story fell with the One Piece arc because the author decided that the MC no longer cares about his partners before leaving making stupid promises and the author makes him resolve this by using his lust skills to resolve a situation where the girls should decide this seriously, it destroyed the construction of a character who showed himself as someone who cared about his women and treated them fairly, in addition to giving preference to women with less development in the arc.

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This story started out strong with good character interactions, but it quickly fell off. In the later chapters, the author got lazy with their writing of the MC relationships in favor of cheap smut. In the last three worlds he has newly entered, within 48 hours he will meet a group of random OC women that will later become part of his harem. The author traded quality characterizations for the chance to write as much cheap smut as they can.

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There's not much to say, if you like harem, it's your thing, if not, forget reading.

There are some somewhat unpleasant contents, but there aren't many, especially in the world of Naruto and MHA, so don't worry, most of the story is fun and worth reading, if you're going to marathon it, you can wait to wait for the releases, because It will take time to launch.

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It started out strong but has slowly gotten worse over time. Book 3 was a pretty big drop in quality with the protagonist starting to make dumb decision after dumb decision.

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This is a good fanfic to read. 

The first chapters could be a bit annoying but it gets better overtime.

There is also character growth.

Also, I have a question author. Will MC get any of his girl pregnant? Just simple question.

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The best part about this novel is that it is written by a sane adult. So not a lot of bullsh*t happens.

The protagonist is proactive in the pursuit of romantic relationships, including romantic relationships with multiple women.

The good part about traveling between multiple worlds is that when the protagonist faces a hard challenge, he can put the world on pause and go to a different one. Rising to the occasion is a lot more engaging than the usual mindless grind of the already OP protagonists.

The bad part is that there is no unified power theory between worlds, so power levels and skill interactions are complete nonsense. It’s fine since most of the time the protagonist tries to become overqualified for the challenge, so nothing can go wrong. It's when stakes are involved that it's dumb.

Worlds don’t react very much in the way that the protagonist did not intend. Regular people should freak out more, and people in power should be a lot more concerned.

Like half of the smut are repetitive and meaningless, and meaningful s*x is sometimes skipped.

It’s good.

Also, one of the girls is “cuckqueen”, which is pretty rare.

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