I cant stand it. Im only reading this sh*t bcs concept of this story is good but author ruined it with his bad MC (not cool type but crying weak minded and lustful type, simply speaking looser) f**king sh*tton of smut, im not against some smut I also enjoy some smut in stories but holy f**k in this is more s*x than f**king story. 

That was really awesome idea with diffrent world etc and I gave it f**king 10 chances, once quit and return in hope to it get better but im suprised maybe author just writing that sh*t for only show others that he is mentally challenged or smth. 

I once again say THIS IDEA WAS GOOD but story when MC get smut related ability Chikyugan is when this dropped rock bottom. 

Disappointment isnt even describing what I feel. Like something that would turn into diamond turned to sh*t it really hurts. Only people that like it are max 15yo or they started reading fanfics/novels in general or they have something wrong in head. 

I really made that long ass review first time in my life just to show my regret lmao I wont do it again this is really annoying Just saying

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I'm a fan, great self interest concept. Is it perfect? Nah it got its rough spots, but for every rough spots there are 3 times the... Shiny spots? For a fanfic its got great prose for the most part of the story. The level of character depth is double edge sword on this fic, so many great personalities especially Toru so far your best chemistry being drown out by size of the harem of other great girls. The smut is alright I give it a solid B, I see that your going for het@i type of raunchiness witch I enjoy in the romance aspect of these  novels. But some of the scenes do get a bit repetative. (Note to author: Id recommend reading Chain of Ascension by GreyFox for examples of what I consider A+ raunchy romance.) The MC decently flawed and not perfect, witch I think is great! Just means there's room for growth and more books! 

Looking forward to next Friday.

Keep up the the great work and if you got a patre0N, where it at? Not to get at more Chapters just want show my appreciation for your time and effort.

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Great concept and great story overall. It can get a little hard to follow since there are a lot of worlds and a lot of characters but I enjoy it nonetheless. Well written and intriguing although with some out of character moments from the MC, it seems the MC does some really stupid sh*t for the plot sometimes. Really enjoying it so far. Can’t wait to read more! Thanks for sharing.

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A major disappointment is what this novel turned into, the author dropping any semblance of a proper dimensional traveling story into one purely of smut... This had such great potential and a wonderful idea with the multiple worlds he can travel to, but I guess the author is a teenager IRL and his lust got the better of him, causing the downfall of this potential great story. Read it if all you want is quick smut with a slight amount (barely) of proper world adventuring action. Hell even the smut isn't that great so it's even further a shame that the author did this.

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The story is very good for the first 2000 days. Interesting multiverse fiction and its interesting to see frequent hopping for once. The smut is very good and the relations with some of the girls are rly good and well developed (nami/toru). After that the added contant time constrains make the story very annoying to read. MC casually going around in dates instead of doing his utmost to get strongers makes no sense. It's a smut with a power system but the smut does nothing for its power system, except expanding the harem which has thus far been completely useless. He's just collecting adicional burdens in every world. When MC gets his ass handed to him we're left wondering, why should MC win? He's not a special in any way. He's dumb as a brick, a hypocrite that is a hero and a simp in one world, then acts as a villain or a chad in a diferent world. 

His game "build" is horrible and all over the place, with extremely bad decisions left and right. Even when he gets to free pick a quirk and a devil fruit he chose a support and an aoe power which are both useless at making him win the all important 1v1 PVP fights. Another thing that got very old very fast was MC losing several fights in a row due to "carelessness", even after an actual death experience. He keeps saying he's learning but never learns and it's clearly a plot construct to keep the world's story plot on track and artifically create "difficulty" when there shouldn't be any for the MC. Hope the writter can get the story back on track now in chapter 4.9/10 - Story concept. Only challenges and quests need some work2/10 - MC8/10 - Harem, only brought down by all the uninterestings OCs and drama

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Like the overall story, it gets bogged down in spots and can be hard to follow if you don't know the least bit about the world the person is going to. But liking it so far, I have been writing something similiar to this for a long time, and was just surprised when I started readying it!

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Great read so far!

Im a big fan of multiword fanfictions and this is top 3 I've read so far. Keep up the great work and ill keep reading

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