Style:The style is light and fluffy, which is appropriate for most of the story. Upon occasion, it feels like it could be a little tighter and more cohesive, but it's minor and I don't know how to point to where to change anything specific.

Grammar:On point, few mistakes, and those are quickly corrected.

Story:This is an interesting and fun spin on Isekai-gone-wrong. It has a balance of plot drive and character drive elements: You can see some future conflicts being set up early on, but a lot of the action is currently focused on what the characters are choosing to do.

Character:It really shines here. Yuki and [redacted] are fun characters, and every rabbit needs a pet human, right? There is a lot to like about them, but neither one is perfect. They are just trying to live and maybe become better people in the process. And even the characters you don't get to know much about yet have a bit of their personality and history shine through, there are several that I am very, very curious about.

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Hollex

Status: arc one, author recap.

Mar 6, 2024

It is quite an interesting read with a rather intriguing concept. Admittedly, the beginning is a bit slow and for the most part it feels like an Alice in Wonderland adventure. But later on it starts to introduce more characters and the world in general and it becomes quite a bit darker and in my opinion more interesting. And finally the protagonist feels a bit repressed (of her desires) as well as naive to have "discovered" the conspiracy of truck-san. But all in all it is a work that if you like to have tender moments as well as some dark events, it is quite recommendable.

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