By Light_novel_addict
Afterlife wasn’t something that he had thought about, or maybe he had, the downside of being thrust into a new world with your memories wiped and having no recollections of any dreams was disorienting.
…but then again he chose th
Way too heavy on the allegory! Really starts to drag the story down. More time is spent on trying to sound, poetic, and sophisticated than actually moving the story along. It gets to the point where you're skipping entire paragraphs because there's not really anything going on... Or worse in some cases, repeating what happened in the previous paragraph just in a different manner. Really bummed because the story had some potential... But the cringe factor is way too high!!!
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