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Way too heavy on the allegory! Really starts to drag the story down. More time is spent on trying to sound, poetic, and sophisticated than actually moving the story along. It gets to the point where you're skipping entire paragraphs because there's not really anything going on... Or worse in some cases, repeating what happened in the previous paragraph just in a different manner. Really bummed because the story had some potential... But the cringe factor is way too high!!!
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