Total Views (All): | 2,419 |
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Total Views (Chapters): | 1,207 |
Average Views: | 110 |
Word Count: | 6,003 |
Average Words: | 546 |
Pages: | 22 |
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1 / 11 | Mar 7, 2024 |
This story has great potential, but chapters are way too short. There just isn't enough in the chapters to get invested in the story. Also, too much repetition. Stuff from previous chapter is put into following chapter making chapter feel even shorter. It already feels like I'm going to need to read at least 10 chapters before the story actually gets anywhere -- IF it goes anywhere beyond fight after fight. While potential is definitely there, frustration with not being able to get far enough into the story to actually begin enjoying it outweighs possibility that this ''might" be a good story. There are too many other stories that grab my attention in the first chapter, and hold it by the second, to waste time on something that "might" be good after the fifth chapter. Dropped.
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