It's not terrible but it's also not good. The story really lacks depth and the characters are all very boring and 2D except for the computer the MC created. A lot of characters aren't even described at all, you just get a name and that's it.

The MC is described as lacking emotions but somehow still gets annoyed at people. Later on around chapter 58 the author completely abandoned the emotionless characteristic and has the MC become more emotional and talks a lot more. Literally a single chapter, you would have a couple of lines coming from the MC with just some basic answers like yes, no, or ok. Now he's talking and making conversation and joking around?

I still don't understand the 'Girls Love' and 'Gender Bender' tag. The author also seems to be trying to force the idea that the MC could be a different gender. I'm honestly very confused, he identifies as a male but looks like a female but when someone thought he was a female he 'corrected' them by telling them his gender is other. I am so lost at this point. I'm beginning to doubt whether or not the author truly knows their own characters gender.

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LiaFeil

Status: waiting for a new chapter

Jul 24, 2019

I love this story, love it very much.

well, one thing that bothered me. Why are there GB and GL tags there?

Ah, I understand the first, but not for the second. Can someone explain it to me.

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doesn't the MC only have the appearance of a girl? So far, I have not found anything that changed the MC's gender. Except for his appearance.

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retiisi

Status: chapter 206 – burglary

Feb 18, 2020

For those looking for GB or GL, those tags have not been implemented (at least in a clear way) in MC as of ch.206 but the Author promises that they will come somewhere in the future.

This novel is one of those where you can see the Author get better and better as the story progresses and as such I would recommend that the Author rewrites the first 10-20 chapters (chapters before the "death") as those kept me from reading this story for like half a year, but I recently took another look and it got a lot better after I pushed myself to read past those.

What I like about this story is that while the MC looks like a girl (IT'S A TRAP) he makes it an advantage rather than whining about it and also that MC is strong (maybe a thad bit too strong on some points), but also have a lot of things that he can't do, so that you don't get a pic that the MC should just dump other people and do everything himself. Another point is that the "bad guys" are given some background so that they arent just "I-am-the-bad-guy-so-I-do-evil-things" (well except the few in the chapters I'd like the Author to rewrite).

Well this became a lot longer than I thought, but anyhow good job Author and I hope that you keep it up for a long time to come.

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kauntykiki

Status: c0

Feb 28, 2019

I am loving this book so far. I can't wait to find out the MC's back story!

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Rezco

Status: c50

Feb 22, 2020

I Reading this novel bcoz tag Gender Bender, Yuri/GirlLove, Polygamy

But what I get is Trap MC not a Ganderbander, Always getting bullied because have Girly face and Voice, MC always Act alone, rarely talk with Girl like he not interested with girl, I can't not understand what MC ambition or target he true want...

Bcoz im tired waiting for romance and harem, I drop this novel at Chapter 50

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ImSleepy

Status: c44

Apr 5, 2019

Love this book. Looking forward how the other girls melts the heart of our emotionless MC.

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LouSagi_13

Status: c309

Sep 25, 2020

Love the story. Definitely one of my favorites on this site. But the GB/GL/Poly-Tags are slightly confusing because it's very slow burn (reeaaaly slow) and even when they are here the moments are spread thin throughout the story.

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To give a perspective to these things. The Gender Bender becomes clear in chapter 220. The Girls Love like 10 chapters after. Poly then around chapter 290, but it didn't really get explored actively. Meaning there's not been a real romantic interaction been ongoing between more then 2 people at the same time.

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So the story focuses most of the time on other conflicts, that are really interesting by itself, but the romace is never really absent.

Another small warning are the first twentyish chapters, which are not really like the rest of the story. So my recommendation is to read a little bit further (like to chapter 40 or something) before you give up (if you'd even want to by then).

All together it's a wonderful fantasy story with sparkles of a really slow burning romance.

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Siska

Status: chapter 130 – research

Sep 9, 2019

A good read with some decently well written characters, powerful MC (who's a trap, which I have a soft spot for) who's not a "super duper powerful, I defeat everyone I meet type." Which is nice

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Maybe it's just me but it's starting to get pretty cheesy. Still not bad, but it's hard for my interest to not wane.

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AetherialCore

Status: Chapter 23 – Rage

Oct 29, 2023

I don't understand the high rating this story received, at least at this moment, having read only 16 chapters. However, in just these 16 chapters, I already encountered many flaws and illogical elements already.

While the grammar is good overall (by the standards of webnovel), there are inevitable typos, but they never impactfully disrupt the reading flow.

There are also problems with the pacing and characterisation.

Some plot progressions have no set up. Meanwhile, some set ups are not followed through and skipped, ignored by the author. One example of this was in chapter 14,

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when the Akira taught Earth magic to Yuki. She prefaced it that her teaching method was different from Aether's method. Yet, in the next chapter, the Author time-skipped, and never showed the Aether's method. It happened offscreen, so how Akira's method differed from Aether's method was never explained

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As for characterisation problem, you can see it after reading a few chapters. The protagonist motivation and actions seem inconsistent.

Believing in the high rating given by other readers, I will continue reading for now. The author might have improved after much writing, and later chapters are better.

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missyuri

Status: c348

May 22, 2023

This story is really cute. A lot of self growth regarding the MC. Companionship in difficult moments, with interesting since chars. Quite smart and dynamic strategies. A few loopholes for sure and some of an abrupt ending.

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