By GamingWolf
Aperio had been a slave for as long as she could remember. She toiled away in the palace of her masters, her body forced to obey, her mind no longer caring that she did. Her only joy was the small inconveniences an error in her work could bring, t
Thank you for writing such a wonderful book, I noticed some comments that were rather...a bit negative. Some of those comments mentioned an original book and how it was better than the current one. Personally, I think it doesn't matter how much readers enjoyed it if the author was not satisfied with it.
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The story is overall cute, but there are some points that made me take away two stars:
First of all, there are some minor grammatical issues, especially the fact that sometimes the same word/phrase is repeated twice or more in the same paragraph.
Secondly, the story seems a bit wonky: like the five kids of the modest faction meeting up the day before the test, talking about
that time they went camping together and were assaulted
Lastly, many conversations felt a bit forced (not talking about Rinte’s classes at the beginning), and sometimes I felt like what Erina and Yuiko were saying/doing would’ve been more appropriate if they had been a bit older.
That said, I did enjoy the fluff going on, it’s just that I’m not one of those people who can easily enter the “suspension of disbelief” state lol
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