Born with a frail body, but an exceptional talent for magic, Erina dreams of adventuring through the world.
Collapsing due to exhaustion? Who cares? I'm still alive!
Enemies? Didn't I tell you I have magic?
Cake? Sweets? Ah, you know, good point that's a problem... they taste good okay?! What am I supposed to do to resist...
-------
"Isn't that... your 5th slice of cake Erina..."
"Yeah! The cake this place makes tastes so good!!"
"Goddammit... You make every woman jealous Erina with the amount of sugar you consume..."
"I don't eat that much Yuiko..."
"it's like a third of your diet stop trying to play innocent."
"Fineeee...."
-------
"Warning": I try to give you diabetes a lot... so be warned?
This is a pretty fluffy book! It's a book that you can come back to and read to just destress and get some diabetes from, so don't expect too much... heart palpitations due to plot stress and stuff...
Also I'm a still a not a super awesome amazing writer, so expect some parts that might be unrealistic/plot holes (there are many lemme tell you), but please bear with me! We can make it to diabetes land together!
Also posted on ScribbleHub~ (under Esiyx instead because i'm bad at spelling)
Cover Made with Charat Choco~!
This is a rewrite of my first book... uhh... hmm...
Disclaimer: My release schedule is sh- I mean, it's not so great because of school and life...
Join my discord!! https://discord.gg/aEzwY9dR5c
- 66: Natsuki’s… Bear InfestationJun 9, 2022
- 65: Ice Acupuncture, Insects Only!Mar 24, 2022
- 64: An Icy MissionMar 22, 2022
- 63: Reunion~!!Mar 14, 2022
- 62: Platform CompetitionFeb 25, 2022
- 61: Train Shenanigans~Dec 31, 2021
- 60: Train-Kun! (No Isekai Will Be Happening)Dec 29, 2021
- 59: Talking with VolcanoDec 27, 2021
- 58: Moar Powahh!Dec 25, 2021
- 57: A Romanti-… Friendly Dinner~Dec 23, 2021
- 56: Natsumelia~Dec 22, 2021
- 55: Amelia’s PassionDec 14, 2021
- 54: Lesson Continued~Dec 11, 2021
- 53: Magic System~Oct 25, 2021
- 52: A Chaotic Class Day~Oct 24, 2021
- 708 reading
- 169 plan to read
- 21 completed
- 53 paused
- 46 dropped
Thank you for writing such a wonderful book, I noticed some comments that were rather...a bit negative. Some of those comments mentioned an original book and how it was better than the current one. Personally, I think it doesn't matter how much readers enjoyed it if the author was not satisfied with it.
Read More
The story is overall cute, but there are some points that made me take away two stars:
First of all, there are some minor grammatical issues, especially the fact that sometimes the same word/phrase is repeated twice or more in the same paragraph.
Secondly, the story seems a bit wonky: like the five kids of the modest faction meeting up the day before the test, talking about
that time they went camping together and were assaulted
Lastly, many conversations felt a bit forced (not talking about Rinte’s classes at the beginning), and sometimes I felt like what Erina and Yuiko were saying/doing would’ve been more appropriate if they had been a bit older.
That said, I did enjoy the fluff going on, it’s just that I’m not one of those people who can easily enter the “suspension of disbelief” state lol
Read More