This is a pretty decent story thus far.  The story feels like a combination of one of the Chinese horror death game novels, where people get pulled into a horror situation and have to survive increasingly difficult situations, and a cultivation story. 

It's a little rough around the edges, but nothing to serious. Some of the pov transitions feel a little awkward in their timings, but it feels kind the author is getting better at them.

The only other minor complaint I'd have is that while the events seem like they are happening over the course of like several months, from how it's written, it feels like a there is a new event each day and that to get to like chapter 130ish, maybe 2 weeks had passed. Mind you, this isn't a 'needs improvement' complaint, just that for me it makes it harder to keep track of what's happening where and when. 

Still, on the whole, I hope this story gets more attention, though I do understand that this story is very niche due to the particular arrangement of elements it has.

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A really good novel! I wasn't expecting much but the setting is novel (hehe) with interesting characters and A LOT of foreshadowing. I like the pace and the story feels fleshed out, I don't know why this hasn't gotten more attention, probably because it's relatively new? But yeah definitely recommended :)

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The premise and execution so far are interesting, the pace is a little too fast for my tastes and the story could be touched up a little. But it is on the better end of the story spectrum in comparison to most stories. Hopefully the author improves as times goes by and creates something amazing.

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