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this story is amazing and things really pick up in the latter chapters, this author learns as he is writing you can tell and it just keeps getting better each chapter.
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I don't care if MC is evil or rapist or just a homicidal maniac. There is a notice in the description warning you, though the lack of tags is clearly not a wise choice. That's not why I rated it harshly.
The main issue is that the author has huge problems with pace of the story. There is no build up to many things. Characters shift in personality so fast after MC attempts to brake them, you start believing they all have a bipolar disorder. The author is also a bad erotica writer. His erotic fiction resembles a cheap porn. I often have this feeling that the writer is either late for some appointment or just has a limit of words count. He is too impatient. Or just straight immature.
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