Okita Tatsuya, a soon-to-be freshman. He decided to live with his Aunt as fate guides him to his new life, a life where he will experience various things. From that point, Mother Fate who seems to be always playing with him will give him a chance to overcome the obstacle that has been tormenting his life ever since. In a game of love and hate, the only game where he can only have one chance to change it all.
But in a twist of fate—"Do you believe in fate?", the girl said, He met a girl who will join his journey as he conquest this so-called game, created by Mother Fate.
Will he overcome his past? Will he live a peaceful life? Will he turn the odds against him? Follow his journey as he plays the game of love, hate, and despair.
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Work of fiction. All the names, places, and events are all purely based on the author's imagination. Any resemblance to an actual person or events is purely coincidental. The main characters are 18.
Author I believe this novel is good so don't think about dropping it because lack of readers ?????????
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Could be spicier, has some syntax errors, and there's some other minor issues, but it's good. 4.5 is pretty accurate.
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Pretty good novel. I like the concept and story. Only a few problems to be addressed:
1. Don't drag out the revealing of the catastrophic event too much, this should be completely told out by ch140 at the max or it'll feel slow, boring or annoying that we still don't know after all this reading.
2. Related to the first thing, you're dropping a LOT (maybe even too much) loose ends.
For example, what happened to Yuki's sister (My first thoughts were arranged marriage, death, or ntr), who is Robot and why can she avoid an entire company's attempts to find her, the whole raped girl and her childhood friend situation, the background of MC parents (needs to explain why they interacting with heirs and law firm presidents), why the MC shows almost no frustration at being kept from a secret that literally everyone except him knows (honestly at this point, I'm expecting an emotional outburst or anger from the MC because this is a very frustrating situation).
TLDR: Don't drag suspense too long, and finish important loose ends.
PS. HAREM IS ALWAYS WIN.
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Pretty good story. There are some action, romance and mystery. Sadly I can't read it longer because there is too much if mystery just not my type od story. But I recommend start it and decide yourself.
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