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Word Count: | 55,940 |
Average Words: | 1,190 |
Pages: | 204 |
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Yeah don't read this, the author is lazy so lazy that you feel an see it. (The story has 0 depth, 0 logic and a ton of inconsistencies) .
This story feels like the author thought oh this wold be interesting/emotional got lazy in the middle and just copy pasted his thoughts without actually writing a story.
The back story is way, way to short and as you read it you feel like you are being told what to feel instead of feeling it, this is repeated with the mother.
her killing herself because the author wanted us to fell sad? Angry? Like we knew she existed for 2 chapters? With 0 interactions
The MC is a 50 year old man but he behaves like a child "oh this girl teased me lets blush and behave like a 7 year old".
AS I READ THIS STORY IT FELT LIKE A CHORE!!!
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