So far has been an interesting story full of excitement and thrill, but I feel like it's rushing to get to those moments. There isn't enough downtime and buildup between the encounters to make them satisfying when they happen. For example, a character is mentioned or eluded to and then bam just like that the MC and that character meet and fight or talk or what not and then it's on to the next big thing. There's also a problem with the main events seeing as they pass to quickly as well. 

Overall, I like the premise and the first inital chapters setting up. I just think the author needs to slowdown and put a few more details in between main plot points.

 Im looking forward to how you improve.

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As mentioned in the other review, there are some pacing issues. That being said as of right now the story is candy. It's a fun read, and I hope it stays fun.

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it's boring to read.

Any work with an OP hero requires a lot of humor, as well as the absurdity of what is happening is desirable.

Another option is to tell the story from other points of view besides the OP of the protagonist, which turns the hero into some kind of natural disaster.

 At the moment when these conditions are not met, the work quickly loses its charm.

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Pacing is off. &Nbsp;MC is super illogical. Nothing is explained in his lack of reasoning behind most of his actions. Might as well be MTL with how bad the grammar can be at times. I like the concept and it’s the main reason I picked it up, but I would recommend passing on this one until the author does a quality-pass on it at the very least 

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The story moves too fast and there is no character development for the protagonist. The main character is just a kid with powers and 8th grade syndrom, who saves a child from the street on day one without any valid reason. There is potential for improvement, but the author sadly fails to deliver.

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